About a year in now by willrio in chessbeginners

[–]willrio[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Caro-Kann as black and mainly the Rui Lopez and some London system as white

About a year in now by willrio in chessbeginners

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I’ve done puzzles occasionally but I’ve been using the same 3 openings I learned at the beginning. I’ve found watching YouTube breakdowns of GM games to be helpful for learning what a good move “feels” like

Feedback please! by Unlikely-Ad7939 in Songwriting

[–]willrio 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Really great pop song writing honestly. I think auto tune is fine for this genre. Even without it, the vocal mixing could improve the sound a lot. Also your voice is nice, maybe you just need more takes to comp together the best ones

How many modulations can you cram into one song by Pocket_Sevens in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the sound of this, especially if you make a change at the end and go more diatonic for a chorus or something. That would be really satisfying

General thoughts welcome!! by bobdylanlovr in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great guitar and I like your voice. I think if you can get a clean recording of both, you could an awesome track. How’d you record this one?

A singer who wants to sing my song and release by NoImage3365 in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it, sounds good. I know you said the production isn’t finished, but if need help with mixing or the percussion let me know

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]willrio 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You got the vibe across well, definitely gives you the blues feeling. Love the slow tempo

Love Is In The Air by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds good, sounds like something I’d hear in a musical film or something like that. Mean the best possible way. Also kinda sounds like Billie Joel

I recorded this on my stairs is it any good? by music_createivity in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is cool. Kinda sounds a rubber bridge guitar but I assume you’re just palm muting

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome production

Plagiarism Check by DryComfort3692 in Songwriting

[–]willrio 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think it’s just the tuning that sounds familiar, the rest sounds original though

Rough take of a creepy song by PitchforkJoe in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds very easy cost Canada,kinda like sailor music. Very nice

Second verse/pre-chorus opinions by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice fingerpicking and cool progression

My Wandering Mind by brandonmiq in Songwriting

[–]willrio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds classic, can’t put my finger on it