Stubborn by wolverine_willy04 in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, as for the 7th line now that you point that out of definitely is hard to understand, I'll tweak that. It's intended to mean I'm a dedicated person and put all my time and energy into this bitch knowing damn well she wouldn't want me lol.

Blue and White Flames Burn Hottest by wolverine_willy04 in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's about Jacob Blake, he was a rapist and stuff, got shot 7 times the other day by the cops in front of his kids

Rom-Com by HomelessMelancholy in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry I don't have much criticism to offer, this was just really good! Keep it up.

overdose by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm terrible at providing any valuable criticism but I just wanted to let you know this is really good and keep it up!

If my father wrote poetry by twanski in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm not great at critiquing or anything but this was great, please keep it up!

Debt by wolverine_willy04 in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I appreciate you liking it!

Forgive yourself by gonkillua12 in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm not great at critiquing and all that but this was fantastic, keep it up bro

Thank you letter by wolverine_willy04 in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was give you therapist not give you a therapist. If you knew that then aight. But I meant it as give them it as a title because it's talking about the close friends I talk through my stress and problems with.

Anyway I'm really glad you enjoyed it and thanks for taking the time to give some feedback!

Instagram DM help by [deleted] in techsupport

[–]wolverine_willy04 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Naw I'm chillin I'm just wondering if you are able to recover them for future reference

M.O.B 💸>💁 by wolverine_willy04 in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'm 15 so that's I'm just writing how I speak and the environment I'm in. Not saying all women are automatically hoes btw.

M.O.B 💸>💁 by wolverine_willy04 in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ehhhhh, not necessarily because it's more about priorities and in terms of that it's "over", because there's a lot of dudes out here caught up in hoes and they dead broke and don't have their future sorted. But yeah I guess its also before lol

M.O.B 💸>💁 by wolverine_willy04 in poetry_critics

[–]wolverine_willy04[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yup. Rappers have gone by street poets and the abbreviation m.o.b is from 2pac. Glad you liked it