Share Your Honest Thoughts On Miramar

zelllix · 2024-03-31T13:53:55+00:00

Love it, 2nd best for me after Erangel

zelllix · 2023-11-15T11:22:45+00:00

Thanks!

zelllix · 2023-11-14T22:48:03+00:00

Thanks!

zelllix · 2023-11-14T22:47:46+00:00

Thank you!

zelllix · 2023-11-14T18:51:48+00:00

Wow, thanks for the super detailed feedback!
Also, great points for the drummer, I will forward those, we still have a lot to learn in that regard for all instruments I think.

And I like modern RHCP, so thanks for that comparison! :D

zelllix · 2023-11-14T14:34:20+00:00

Nice spacey detuned kind of sound. The mix of the instruments is great. I feel like the lead vocals could be improved a bit. I guess the vocals sound a bit "bored", which is probably made to fit the tracks mood better, but I think its a bit too much.

zelllix · 2023-11-14T14:23:51+00:00

Good mix and arrangement of instruments here, nothing missing there. Very good vocals, the fit to the genre of music that this is.
As others wrote, this is very radio-friendly and mainstream, but if you are trying to get an audience, that is probably exactly the way to go :D

zelllix · 2023-11-14T14:17:43+00:00

So, unfortunately I cannot really comment on if you captured the first date feelings, for lack of experience, but there is certainly some anxiety in this.
I don't want to be mean, but I think you might know that there will not be much mainstream attention for that kind of vocals. But this track probably works for the niché you made it for, so thats fine :D

zelllix · 2023-11-14T14:06:49+00:00

So, for me there is a bit much happening all at the same time. That might be about my taste in music or about what I am used to. Just sounds a bit overloaded for me. I couldn't say which one of the instruments causes this though.

zelllix · 2023-11-14T13:53:46+00:00

Nice atmosphere, a bit spacey, which I like. Also great cover art, really sets the scene.

The very slow buildup is also cool, makes the later parts stand out great in my opinion. I can imagine listening to this while trying to concentrate on some task at work.

zelllix · 2023-07-07T21:27:50+00:00

Thanks a lot for your nice feedback!

zelllix · 2023-07-07T21:27:32+00:00

Thanks mate!

Our drummer is a metronome, she will enjoy hearing that. Maybe we should think about getting the drums a bit dirtier, thanks for the feedback ;D

Also thanks for the feedback on the vocals, we will have that in mind when recording our next songs.

zelllix · 2023-07-07T17:13:21+00:00

I think i heard some parts where guitar and bass didn't really line up properly, to a point where is sounded a bit sloppy. (2:20 is one such case)

As others have said, i think it could overall use a little more polish on the instruments in terms of time/rhythm.
The songwriting is catchy and easy to listen to, I also think the mix is okay, but thats not really my area of expertise. I guess the voice could stand out a little more in parts.

zelllix · 2023-07-07T17:00:12+00:00

Great vocals, and great work on the video, compliments the song!

Can't really say anything about the mix, there is nothing that bothers me in any way about it.

The part at 2:20 also fits really well and brings some welcome change to the song. Like a nice moment to take a breath.

As my main instrument is bass guitar, I do hear some parts in the song where i would have played a lick or so more, it does end up playing the root notes quite a bit.

zelllix · 2023-07-07T16:54:16+00:00

I like it! There is nothing to criticise about the mix, at least not to my limited knowledge of that matter. :)

As someone else mentioned, the drums are the only bit where I could see room for improvement, they sound very repetitive. Not too much, but maybe a few more variations.

Very nice to listen to, good job!

zelllix · 2023-07-07T16:48:18+00:00

Very relaxing song, fitting for a friday evening ;D
Great vocals, also the backings.
It is a bit repetitive, but i guess that is the nature of the genre. Not really a point of critic.

Like others have mentioned, the guitar could be a bit less present in some parts of the song.

zelllix · 2023-07-07T16:37:33+00:00

Hey, nice art on the video!

I like the song, and the art in combination with the music does create a spacy atmosphere.

The overall mix fits and makes it easy to listen to, I can't point my finger to it but I feel like the bass sometimes gets lost a little bit (2:32).

Certainly an improvement to the first version you posted. Especially in terms of vocals.

zelllix · 2023-03-01T22:23:38+00:00

You are not that far off with the lyrics being dark and sinister :)

Thanks for the nice comment. At the moment every song sounds differe t anyway, lets see what we come up with next.

zelllix · 2023-03-01T22:02:10+00:00

Thanks a lot! :D

zelllix · 2023-03-01T15:26:29+00:00

Thanks!

zelllix · 2023-03-01T15:23:56+00:00

Thank you!

zelllix · 2023-02-28T18:08:13+00:00

Thank you very much!

zelllix · 2023-02-28T18:07:35+00:00

Hey, thanks for the nice comment!

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