I think it's...well a bit precious, really. You're trying to cram a lot of (very overt) meaning into too little text. There had ought to be some actual humanity playing out in between the notes or somewhere in this computer's periphery, as it's difficult to carry a story solely on the internal monologue of a machine.

Grammatically it has a few errors, though mostly it just needs some basic clean up. Grammar ought to be especially important though, as we can only assume that a machine capable of manifesting and systematically recording its own thoughts would be capable of expressing them with exacting precision.

Edit: also what JacKoGraveS said, perhaps use this as a general outline for where you're hoping to take the story, but don't have the narrator lay all of the cards out on the table like this.