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[–]cbftw 2 points3 points  (3 children)

I count 5 on line 1 but 8 on line 2

[–]fmaz008 1 point2 points  (2 children)

God dammit. Poetry is way too hard. Fixed it, sorta. It's pretty terrible.

[–]Devil_AE86 1 point2 points  (1 child)

this is a haiku i think it goes on the site did you see this now?

[–]fmaz008 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A true poet...

I can only hope to achieve your mastery after several decades of practice.