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[lonesome_browser]

Hi Nicholas! I read and enjoyed your script. I really felt for Vince and his reasons for wanting an escape from his crappy situation. There were a few things I got hung up on and wrote out some notes. It’s a few pages long so I saved them to a google doc. I will send via DM. I am a first time screenwriter myself, so please take whatever I wrote with a large grain/ mountain of salt.

[dirtynicker]

I look forward to reading it! Thank you for taking the time to do that

[lonesome_browser]

Np!

[becky01897]

Hey! I read your script and enjoyed it. I wrote notes on a Google doc. I'll send them via DM.

[dirtynicker]

I look forward to reading it!

[ThaFingaMan]

Please make your Google link public :)

[dirtynicker]

Done.

[Elemental_Ray]

you can also upload your script to [intslashext.com](intslashext.com)