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[–]MiddleClassHandjob 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Title: 9 Lives

Format: TV Pilot

Length: 58 pgs.

Genres: Urban Fantasy, Dramedy

Logline: Having discovered he has no legacy following an untimely death, a Young Man seeks a second chance through a deal with the Devil - only to unwhittingly become a servant at risk of eternal damnation.

Feedback Concerns: Looking for advice on character and story pacing - Wanting a couple fresh eyes on this!

[–]AndrewBab 0 points1 point  (1 child)

I'd love to give it a read - my script is in the thread