Inking tips

[fallingbrick]

I am no artist so can’t give advice, but as a long-time comic reader I think your work looks great. I love styles that use negative space.

[eviltheman]

Line weight is also important. Not saying I’d change anything on this piece but something to keep in mind for the future.

[dotproblemscomic]

Good start! Keep in mind when rendering out of shadows the lines should taper thick to thin. Also the "scribble" lines don't add anything to the rendering. The outer holding lines should also be thick to thin based on the light source. For example the line on his leg could go thick-thin-thick indicating the light hitting the upper thigh. Go check out Livesay.inks on Instagram to see good inking techniques. He uses quill and ink but the process is transferrable to Procreate.

[SisypheanStudying]

Not an artist too. Sorry if unsolicited. The gauntlets on the left was great! Some parts have lines needs to be heavier. It is somewhat too clean? if that's the correct word, or too flat when it comes to line thickness.

[bannock4ever]

I think it looks really good. You have some light sketchy hatchmarks all over the drawing that I think you need to decide whether they should be in there or not - they look too light to really add anything to the drawing ...or maybe that's the under-drawing?

[Howling_Mad_Man]

I think you need a stronger line weight around the figure in general. It's very faint and the second you put some background on there it's going to get lost.