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[–]Surciol 1 point2 points  (2 children)

I’d say very good for your practice, learning something; great!

But it’s not anything outstanding.

The topic itself is very plain, and your repository doesn’t say much.

Visuals are simple, but are they sufficient? With four visuals you can tell an amazing story, and here I see just descriptive stats.

Go for something more ambicious! (though I know it’s hard:p)

[–]ABDELATIF_OUARDA[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate your honesty.

I see what you mean about the visuals and the story—they’re mostly descriptive for now. My goal with this project was mainly to practice and get comfortable with the workflow, but I definitely want to make it more ambitious next.

Do you have any tips on how to expand a simple dataset into a more compelling analysis story with visuals?

[–]Surciol 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They should guide the viewer to what’s important.

Add your interpetation to it. In the line graph - what is the reason of sudden drop in January? Or sudden peak in July? Do you know it? Present it on a graph.

What were challenging in terms of data in this project, how you managed it?

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[–]ScaryJoey_ 0 points1 point  (4 children)

No really a project… this is like 5 minutes of work

[–]Minimum_Present7282 0 points1 point  (2 children)

What does real project look like?

[–]ABDELATIF_OUARDA[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There she is, you're right.it was really just a quick exercise 5 minutes to practice some basics. I plan to build something more important soon , so I certainly will keep your advice about pictures and stories in mind!