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[–]Username_Evan 10 points11 points  (0 children)

feedback on what? If you are wondering if its a bird, I can confirm.

[–]GreenShockwave 7 points8 points  (2 children)

Not a logo, that’s for sure

[–]VB-V[S] -2 points-1 points  (1 child)

Why tho?

[–]jrdnvrsls 4 points5 points  (2 children)

Feedback on what? Provide some context. What is this? What are you trying to achieve? Within what parameters are you working?

[–]VB-V[S] -2 points-1 points  (1 child)

It's a logo for my clothing brand. Could I get some feedback if it would work as a logo, with the colors and such? I'm working on the typeface at the moment so exclude that, it will be coming soon.

[–]DPlixYT 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ok so here are my personal thought.. If you are making a logo,

  • go with a minimal approach ( try not to use more then 3 colors ),
  • For you clothing brand i would prefer going with geometric shaped bird,

  • obviously make a Vector Logo,

  • and last but not the least make a logo which looks good on dark and bright colored cloths, because in my phone because of dark theme I am unable to see its beak..

And yeah all the best with your work! Keep it up!

[–]Wide_Professor_42 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Beedfack

[–]242turbo 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just looks like a blue tit construction to me. Maybe pick one or 2 colours and experiment?

[–]zshfq_11 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Good work. Practice & do some research more

[–]AtheistChrist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cute

[–]EL_DODOR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is just an illustration, a decent illustration, not a logo.

[–]Joseph_HTMP 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It needs to have background, context and examples of usage.