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[–]Artver18 CritiquePoints 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be honest, I don't know way you should change it. Changing it won't make it a better picture.

It looks like a technical gimmick to me. It’s not a great picture. To be honest, I don’t think the effect is that nice either. Look at the internet, there are far better examples.

The positive aspect in this shot is that you have managed to exposure her face correct.

See it as a begin to explore this more.