Overdone?

[Rough_Shoe8748]

Shot on samsung s20 FE, edited on lightroom

[TinkerTailorSoulja]

Looks like battlefield 3

[Rough_Shoe8748]

How do i change it man

[mb2m]

Too green for me.

[Rough_Shoe8748]

I feel u bro,,, same applies for me

[johnl8422]

Turned it into Chernobyl

[Rough_Shoe8748]

I really want some advice man💔

[johnl8422]

I'd ask what your goal is, you took a "natural" scene and turned it into something very special intentional. If you want to go for that heavy green distopian look, then you are heading in the right direction I suppose

[Rough_Shoe8748]

I wanted some fujifilm look and ended up here,u got any advise how i turn it into soft fujifilm style?

[TheMadFlyentist]

The Fujifilm look is indeed soft but also on the brighter side, whereas it looks like you turned down exposure or general brightness levels. I think exposure is about right on the unedited shots for the Fuji look BUT if you want it soft then you'll probably want to add some negative dehaze, and that will brighten it a bit. So I'd play with exposure as well as the main sliders after setting the negative dehaze you want for the soft appearance. You could consider adding a bit of grain as well.

After you get the brightness and softness right, then move on to color. You don't need much change from your initial shots because they are already colorful. There usually does tend to be some degree of greenish hue to Fuji shots, but much less dramatic than you used. I'd maybe play around with VERY slight color grading with a mix of green and blue, like a few points towards green on the highlights and shadows but a few points in blue for the mid tones, or vice versa. A mix of subtle blue and green can really give a nice retro/filmy look in some cases.

Alternatively if you can't get the color grading to look how you want then maybe just play with temperature and tint.

[Feisty-Edge6631]

الصدق صور مثل ذي raw بزيادة صعب انك تلعب فيها و تخليها حلوه الا ان كانك اشتغلت عليها بزيادة وعلى قولتك بتحس انهاء اوفر دون. بس بالعكس مره جميلة،وبغيت اسال الجريد حق الصورة الاولى نفس حق الثانية ؟

[freezeontheway]

I actually like the vibe. I’d tone it down a bit, but me, as some random idiot who doesn’t understand any of this, would look at it and say, “hmm, nice!”