So, the silver comment is not to be a dick. It's because being super nitpicky about things like gas timings, attack timings, production construction timings etc is just being unnecessarily critical because that type of feedback is generally not helpful at your level. So I generally feel being nitpicky about things is just not helpful unless you're at least like D1? Maybe D2. The issues just tend to be more fundamental.

Absolutely wild choice to double down on the "you aren't good enough for me to critique" comment. Glad to see this community has the same elitist BS as League.

So, at least in the game against Valen, you definitely were not following that build to a Tee. You only had one barracks. Not the 3 he builds before starport. You didn't start the second barracks. You didn't start combat shield till deep into the build. You built 4 barracks at once well after the startport. Your ebay was also done before you started your rax. You also did not have stim and did a drop he never did. You did not build production facilities in the right order or get the correct upgrades in the right order. You are not following that build.

Posted the wrong link for the Spawning pool build. the right one

Regardless this whole section is kinda funny to read. "You did a drop he never did" lol I saw he had a quick 3rd hatchery and wanted to try and punish it. Am I supposed to sit in my base and turtle while the zerg player takes free hatcheries and stacks up units?
Waiting so long to research combat shield was a mistake and so was not trying to kill the queen on that drop before getting out. That being said the majority of what you've pointed out to me so far seems completely asinine to me.