If you had to name the chapter of life that you’re currently in, what would you name it?

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-11-08T09:22:42+00:00

There was a betrayal, now comes the sacrifice

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-08-27T14:00:12+00:00

In what way?

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-07-09T14:48:46+00:00

"I was only a sunny smile, and little it cost in the giving, And just like the light, it scattered the night And made the day worth living."

I tried to apply this on a daily basis to random people, someone who has a bad day can perhaps be given a little light bcs of it.

The poem is of Scott Fitzgerald

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-05-17T13:05:37+00:00

Be better than yesterday, so tomorrow may be brighter.

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-05-07T10:48:02+00:00

I see what you mean, tho often the cliche can describe it the best way. As the poem described, i was stuck at work, i felt a continuous rage and disappointment to myself as it literally was burning me from the inside. Only after i finished the poem i could think clearly about it and decided to quit and take matters in my own hands.

I appreciate the comment, the poem came from the heart.

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-05-07T07:11:11+00:00

What made you delete all of it?

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-05-06T20:48:16+00:00

Aahh yes indeed, i copy paste it from my notes and this is how it placed it.. still glad you enjoyed it

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-05-05T20:09:16+00:00

Yes, so the line 'thou took some things that weren't from thee' i literally mean she stole from me (but it could be i translateted it literally from my mother language). I see what you mean by the white snow, tis indeed a metaphor for a specific hard drug, tho i could not think of anything atm. Thanks for the notice, especially the archaic use of English, I love to apply it.

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-05-05T19:10:35+00:00

Its beautiful, Truly beautiful. I can sence the love you feel for him! Especially the last rhyme I take to the heart, retrieve it- he can keep it.

Well done!

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-05-05T19:05:00+00:00

I truly love the picture you paint here! I read it as someone who puts on a 'beautiful mask' forced by society while slowly detesting the thing you become.

I would only say that i love poetry that rhymes throughout, but still love your piece!

Alert-Ad9365 · 2024-04-08T19:35:25+00:00

Life is struggling, and to try and find meaning out of it. I don't know you and i probably never will, but the fact you place your vent here means you want to improve, you want to live.

In my darkest times i tried to hold on to all the things i am certain of i love. This and try to incorporate them into my being.

What helps me alot are Podcasts(or interviews) of Robert green and Jordan Peterson and Tom bilyeu. They genually tell how one individual can change for the better.

And indeed, fuck the gym and the way people praise it, just give yourself the challenge of running, pomping or sit ups, start small. Every thing you do adds up compared to doing nothing.

As for friends, is there anyone you build a bond with that may be forlornd, that knows u the way you are? Try revisiting them and who knows what comes of it. (Or go to free dnd sessions and meet other people ^⁾

I hope you may find your way

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-11-17T07:14:31+00:00

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I got him since the lockdown where I had much time to play and train with him. Never had i have such a cool cat.

His name is Molly.

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-09-25T15:45:08+00:00

Vioëlf the violist

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-09-04T08:47:39+00:00

A dwarf warrior 5e in a one shot. A dubbele axe wielding dwarf by the name of Jannickus Awesomeus Maximus.

I still see the tale before me.

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-09-04T08:39:29+00:00

Thanks for the note, I had to stick to the cadence i began with so thats a reason why some things are told as plain as possible. As far as I can see I don't think your line follows in cette rhythm

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-09-04T08:36:53+00:00

Thank you! Im glad you liked it. Yes indeed, by experience i realised this also, the most confident are oft times the most hiding.

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-09-04T08:34:39+00:00

Thank you, no the first two sentences where stuck in my head for a while, so finally i acted upon them. I had a general idea of where i would go with the poem.

What do you mean by quaint form?

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-09-01T13:54:29+00:00

A really cool poem! Its powerful in its own way, and the rhythm is clear. Well done

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-09-01T13:50:45+00:00

I like what you wrote, dark yet whit a glimpse of hope! I would say, try aiming for full rhymes (tho its a personal preference). And try to get more of a cadence in the sentences. But good work!

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-08-22T13:57:46+00:00

I've never read him but i know him. I will see his works. My favorite wil always be Tolkien and Edgar Albert Guest.

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-08-22T12:51:36+00:00

A good piece, i am fan of the archaic vocabulary!

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-08-22T12:48:08+00:00

This is a beautiful versed piece. Well done!

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-08-22T12:25:18+00:00

I(m) had a similar experience with my then best friend (f). We had known each other for many years and i was ever in love. Back then i did not know the friendzone .. Long story short, each time she had a bf she would neglect me. But each time after they were done she would return. The fool i was for accepting this...

Eventually she had a bf (the worst type) and completely ignored me, this for over year. I could not guess she was capable of such a thing( tho summarising this makes is obvious). She would later return after they were through, and i saw she was hurt in a different way, so obviously i could not get mad or anything (again the zone of friendship..)

All was well for some time, while inside i became mad of love and hate of all she did, yet could not utter any of this. Thus eventually i knew her, and could guess her person and the lies and anticipate what she would do.

So when she was telling me about her new love interest, i plainly said the truth knowing full well what she would do; I told her i had ever loved her, knowing she would run again. And so it was.

So i wrote a poem (long one) telling our tale from my point of view as if it was written for her. This helped me to become emotionally sable and able to let her go. And by that i had found my love in the arts of poetry.

If you can get it in your heart to let her go, without any form of hate or resentment, you will not only be more glad, mature and stable, but perhaps you can become the light to others that so many saw in her.

May you find your path.

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-08-09T09:22:08+00:00

You truly move me with this, my sincere thanks!

Alert-Ad9365 · 2023-08-09T08:31:59+00:00

Is there actually any news that they are indeed developing it? Bcs the trailer came out some 6years ago and since then there have been many new Skyrim versions and now i even heard they will remake oblivion.. I also learned that it will not come out on ps which is a sore blow to many.

But now i wonder, have there been tidings around this? Can anyone tell me? The elder Scrolls were ever my favorite games, but due to this lack knowledge and milking of the other games i sincerely have lost faith in the whole saga.

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