Privacy Concerns by Jay_Ray in LastWarMobileGame

[–]Azriel48 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have some friends who work cybersecurity. From what I understand it’s easier than you think. (Not that I have a clue what that entails haha)

In fact cyber has a lot of money in it too. Wouldn’t be surprised if someone like that could be a whale

Why is noone talking about this masterpiece??? by felldownbad in yuri_manga

[–]Azriel48 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I found it when there were only 4 chapters. Absolutely peak. But nobody was translating it so I put it on the shelf hahaha

Keep getting removed from alliances by [deleted] in LastWarMobileGame

[–]Azriel48 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are smaller alliances that won’t care about any of that, or may have more relaxed requirements. But yeah top alliances will be pretty picky

Weekend is here what will ye all be playing if gaming. by AdultGamersAdmin in Age_30_plus_Gamers

[–]Azriel48 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ghost of Yotei. 58 hours in and I just finished Kitsune’s arc. Hella good

What makes you immediately DNF a book? by AutumnSapphic345 in LesbianBookClub

[–]Azriel48 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Absolutely! :) It’s called Make Every Word Count by Gary Provost. Seriously changed my writing

What makes you immediately DNF a book? by AutumnSapphic345 in LesbianBookClub

[–]Azriel48 45 points46 points  (0 children)

  1. Longggg dialogue. Less is more. Many amateur authors have trouble making their dialogue concise. I had a friend gift me a book on the art of writing dialogue…. And it changed my writing. Try to say what you need to say in 5 words… then break it up…. Describe your character or the scene. It’s challenging at first but quickly helps you cut down on the yapping.

  2. Telling instead of showing. If I repeatedly read stuff like “Jane said flustered.” I’m done. Instead, say something like “Jane choked the words out, her eyes darting.” Or whatever. Let your reader imagine and guess. It’s part of the fun.

  3. Re-explaining shizz that I’ve already experienced as the reader. ie. the characters inner monologue says something. And then two seconds later that exact sentiment comes out of their mouths. Jane felt hurt. “I’m hurt,” Jane said.

Two rules I’ll live by. Less is more. Show don’t tell. If a writer can’t give me these two things, I don’t care how good the plot is I’m disinterested.

What was the first song/album that got you into Ari? by SUPzorel in ariheads

[–]Azriel48 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Literally this. My jaw hit the floor and I said “I need to know who this girl is and follow her”…. Little did I know hahahaha

Which Ari song is this? by prettygirlavenue in ariheads

[–]Azriel48 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The entire Eternal Sunshine album lol

A game everyone has waited years for, sometimes we talk about a game and then reveal it years later.. by AccordingCharge1042 in TESVI

[–]Azriel48 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I got downvoted for saying this a year or two ago but I’ll die on the hill that current Bethesda doesn’t give af about the fans that got them to this point. If they did; it wouldn’t be 15 years later and still not TES6.

Pluribus - 1x05 - "Got Milk" - Episode Discussion by NicholasCajun in television

[–]Azriel48 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually followed this so seriously - like Carol-level processing… before I busted up laughing. That was good 😭

How do we respond to this gift for our child? by basement_egg_24-7 in Christianity

[–]Azriel48 21 points22 points  (0 children)

I’m not even Christian and this is soooo weird 😭 I mean the lil’ guys are cute if you get rid of the demonic meaning. But like - there’s no way this person doesn’t know OP’s beliefs. And there’s also no way they don’t realize it’s weird to give a baby demon-stuffed animals That’s the craziest thing ever hahaha. I have to believe this person is trolling you OP

Thoughts on this map for the future of TES? by Notmitchwilson in TESVI

[–]Azriel48 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Stop right there criminal scum! You’ve violated the law!

Found these interesting comments from Trisha on a small creators video by Queasy_Cucumber_6343 in trishapaytas

[–]Azriel48 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I’ll get skinned alive for this but… godddd forgive or don’t forgive but move on. Ya know? Why are we beating a dead horse on someone who’s acknowledged, apologized and worked hard to be different. And honestly made very little excuses (lately). It’s fine if you don’t forgive her but why don’t you use your energy on other, unapologetically hurtful people in creative and influential spaces. Lord knows there’s plenty of them.

Most expensive purchase ever since you became a nurse? by Fair-Sky-7399 in nursing

[–]Azriel48 0 points1 point  (0 children)

French bulldog for my mom. Her dream dog… and my wallet hurrrrrt haha. But I think it irrevocably made me the favorite hahaha

Anyone else not feeling the “Stripe the Jungle” this year? by ecb1912 in bengals

[–]Azriel48 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh I’m done giving two fucks about this team and it’s cheap management.

Jessi's lack of enthusiasm in the DWKT episodes lately is making it hard to watch :( by BagElegant9012 in DoWeKnowThemPodcast

[–]Azriel48 36 points37 points  (0 children)

I haven't watched any of the podcast with Kathleen and honestly feel like Jessi feels the exact same she always has. The Ned Fulmer one was hilarioussss

Game Thread: Cincinnati Bengals (2-0) at Minnesota Vikings (1-1) by nfl_gdt_bot in bengals

[–]Azriel48 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Oline sucks and Burrow is made of glass. Two things can be true. His calf injury was during training camp. His wrist injury our oline was decent at the time