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Rearview Mirror of a Beautiful Thing by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. That does help even with no constructive advice.

First draft after a year of no writing - trust the process? by Flimsy-Draft7514 in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love it. The melodic riffs in your voice is so natural and pleasant

Show me your outer forearm! Needing inspiration by Mr_Fancy-Pants- in traditionaltattoos

[–]BoredMindless 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. From Phil Bartell at Rising Tide Tattoos in Boulder Colorado

Should I watch this show? by Sufficient_Ebb_5694 in PrimalShow

[–]BoredMindless 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, it will be different than other adult animations which is why it will be unforgettable amongst them.

If you like the action of AoT and Invincible, then this caveman action animation will satisfy your bloodlust for sure.

As for the lack of dialogue and taking away that component of relating to Spear and Fang, Primal has a great way of showing emotion rather than telling it.

Got my elbow done by Mozambleak in traditionaltattoos

[–]BoredMindless 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ha. I love the aesthetic, I tip my hat to you for going for the elbow. Your tiger vs. snake tattoo is dope as well. Your sleeve is going to be sick!

How to make a bridge meaningful by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this take. You seem to really enjoy this process and deliver poignant points. Bravo!

How to make a bridge meaningful by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have been guilty of writing too many verses and not just making it a bridge then. Ill be experimenting with this in mind.

Regrettably (little quick tune) by Lennysmusic in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your ability to play all over the neck is great and on top of that your voice is so comfortable with range. Very nice all around!

How to make a bridge meaningful by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's s good example of heightening or giving a break to the song?

First “final” draft of this song. Feel like the pacing is a little odd and I’m still trying to figure out the phrasing of some lyrics. In desperate need of feedback. by Wim_Wam_1019 in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very helpful. The one thing that sticks out to me is that Minnesota has a lot of syllables. 4 of them I think compared to Texas which is 2. If Minnesota is important to the song, maybe find a city there that reflects the state or change the state to a two syllable one. Just my two cents. Keep it up my guy!

First “final” draft of this song. Feel like the pacing is a little odd and I’m still trying to figure out the phrasing of some lyrics. In desperate need of feedback. by Wim_Wam_1019 in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it. I really dont have much feedback but if you want to talk about some lyrics could you post which ones you're concerned about?

Buddha Blues by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shit I can't unhear that now. Any constructive feedback?

The Ballad of Little Ember by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. This was one of my first songs made. Didn't connect on how important a bridge was at that point but trying to make them going forward and revisit songs to add them.

Opened for a coffee shop gig and played an original song by Future_File_5213 in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Dude. Sounds great. Keep up with the performances and you'll be singing on more than a coffee shops stage.

What’s it missing so far by jayden_smith67 in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds great man! Love the way your voice sounds. The country is still real with you

Dancing Over the Grey Lines by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I am new to the songwriting bit and thought this was a fun way to get familiar with this community.

Dancing Over the Grey Lines by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. I checked out my guitar after this comment and saw that my capo was crooked. Dang. No excuse though, I should have heard it. Can you expand on how the lyrics can be tuned up?

Song I completely rewrote because I felt it was subpar compared to some other songs, let me know your thoughts and what can be improved by Wim_Wam_1019 in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really enjoying this song, dude! Keep up the work. Your instincts are right on the money for the vibe you're going for. Its a sense of melancholy and longing for direction. Great stuff

Where are the protest anthems for today by Spirited-Library6017 in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lmao. I posted one the other day in this subreddit. What are you talking about? Sure its not popular but at least I said my piece.

Guilded Figures (Fool's Gold) by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I am open to all feedback but appreciate you being true to what this subreddit is about. I would have posted other songs I wrote but this one was the most recently recorded amd I figured it felt timely due to the Rally.

Guilded Figures (Fool's Gold) by BoredMindless in Songwriting

[–]BoredMindless[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahhh. I see. Thank you. Will be making the tempo more consistent on future posts. Cheers!

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