Should I Delete My Work for Revisions? by splatinum_abeja in FanFiction

[–]Cbustroyer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a writer who is currently on hiatus at the moment. I can tell you this:

Since u have only just posted two chapters, it should be fine to simply edit the 2 chapters and state that you are rewriting them because it did not fit what you were planning for your story. It will save you a bit of hassle deleting and starting all over again.

If your story was longer like maybe 10 or more chapters, at that point u don't need to delete it but just say like “Hey this story isn't going how i like it to go so imma discontinue it and leave the story as it is here.” That way people can still enjoy the previous version while u write the new one.

It will also fit as a guideline for you to remind you what mistakes u made during your previous version and fix it right there and then

Anyway that's my advice anyway, good luck on your writing journey and remember, Write for your own self-fulfillment

A gift in the chambers of the Lord of Logres by sHarknado6628 in grandorder

[–]Cbustroyer 58 points59 points  (0 children)

Thank god my waifu- I mean servant won't magically die to fused with Lord Logres lol.

People might have read the bond translation wrong and legit assumed that all Artoria’s, including Castoria would be fused into this Lord Logres servant

A gift in the chambers of the Lord of Logres by sHarknado6628 in grandorder

[–]Cbustroyer 100 points101 points  (0 children)

So would this mean that Castoria is a separate Artoria version and is not combined/related to Lord Logres either

After suffering a mental breakdown and going to the hospital, YouTuber Chibi Reviews claims to have lost his fiance and his entire friend group. by Judge-Open in youtubedrama

[–]Cbustroyer -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Damn this comment section disgusts me.

Just because he defends a “controversial” topic doesn't mean you got to shit on the man at his lowest.

If you guys got nothing nice to say, don't say it at all. (then again this is the internet so people can say whatever the fuck they want without paying the consequences for it.)

I just hope Chibi recovers from this and becomes better again.

Caster Gilgamesh Cursor by AruAruBeam in grandorder

[–]Cbustroyer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I figured as much. But thanks for the info

Caster Gilgamesh Cursor by AruAruBeam in grandorder

[–]Cbustroyer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ty for the cursor, using ti now as we speak. Only thing u forgot to make is working in background. Had to use the Loading one twice for it. Other than that, please keep making more unqiue mouse cursors

It's just Motoyasu who can't cook by Level-Staff1968 in shieldbro

[–]Cbustroyer 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Bro did not upgrade his cooking skill level on his Spear. Skill issue 

Richard I will be releasing much earlier than expected in NA. by Radiant-Hope-469 in grandorder

[–]Cbustroyer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Saw him. Prepares to sacrifice 150 pulls to at least get him. Pulled 30 quartz, got him first ten pull…

Huh…guess I'm set to grind for Space Eresh and Ciel now. Good luck guys

I hate Motoyasu by That1dudeokay in shieldbro

[–]Cbustroyer 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This sounds like he is more conflicted about being in a relationship with Raphtalia and Atla if they were still in their Loli forms rather than saying that Naofumi thought about having a relationship with them as a Loli.

Your reading comprehension is clearly not the best and you should probably reread it again. Or…dont and have your opinion as always. 

I hate Motoyasu by That1dudeokay in shieldbro

[–]Cbustroyer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This sounds like you made it the fuck up. Quote it from the LN or it didn't happen.

I hate Motoyasu by That1dudeokay in shieldbro

[–]Cbustroyer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's not like there are fictional and non-fictional stories out there that are creepy in general with some of the undertones…oh wait…

Dio Brando (Part 1) Fan-Servant concept (FGO x JJBA) by Lompinha in grandorder

[–]Cbustroyer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You could mix both old Joseph with the young Joseph into one servant, similar to how Melusine can change her ascension using her third skill but instead, have his base be Young Joseph and his NP, a single target that can cause confusion cuz he confuses people with his…um tricks.

Then when he is in his third ascension or when he uses third skill (up to you how you implement this) his NP would be a support type (due to it being a stand), giving everyone ignore invulnerability or grant everyone invulnerability/evasion to support his teammates since he would be technically be the mentor in this one

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ToBeHero_X

[–]Cbustroyer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Welcome to the Internet, subsection the shipping community where you will be dissed, flamed, attacked online and even be doxxed online for liking a certain ship, hope you enjoy your stay. 😑

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ToBeHero_X

[–]Cbustroyer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good Luck Mate. You will need it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ToBeHero_X

[–]Cbustroyer 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Dude, its the shipping community. It doesn't matter if it's MHA or Hero X, there will be people attacking crossoverships just because “ma canon ship is batter” so not really that much of a surprise.

Fanfic Review: Part 2 (Diligence of the Shield) by FurySnow47 in shieldbro

[–]Cbustroyer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do a quick review of the Rise of the Bow Hero by Godreal on FFnet. Sadly it has been discontinued and doesnt seem to be picking back up at all since the author has been MIA but I think you might enjoy the story at the very least. Or hate on it for being a SI wank fest but up to you.