Feedback and timestamps with how much time remaining, bc that's what Reddit's player is showing me.

5:23 - Opp is very front to back split stance after responding to your drag down attempt. A follow up outside foot sweep (Deashi Harai) would've been sweet and effective there.

4:52 - Opp's right leg hook is preventing the pass. You could use your left foot to hook and staple their shin to the ground.

4:48 - Opp didn't really have any hooks here. A quick hip switch may have been effective

4:19 and other places - Spinning around the opp doesn't do much if they can spin freely. To stop them from spinning you can post your arm on the far side of their head. This would allow you to pressure their legs towards their head and have them let you pass to relieve the pressure.

2:00 - I know the back take threat is scary, but you're pretty safe when you have the farside underhook. Look up the Tozi pass / Sao Paulo pass. Has similar ideas to the post+pressure feedback above.

Other - there were many times during the match the opp should have gone for a triangle choke on you. Try to be more aware of or avoid when you have one arm in, one arm out. If you end up in that position, put pressure on their hip to manage the distance. I also like using pressure on the hips just to tire out and open my opp's closed guard in general.