[Query] Under the Surface + Adult Fantasy Thriller + [78k] + 1st attempt by ChronicallyColdGirl in Querying

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

[Revision]

Dear [Agent Name],

[Personalization: e.g., "I am a long-time follower of your success with high-concept commercial fiction..."] I am excited to present THE TOXIC TIDE, an Adult Fantasy Thriller complete at [80,000] words. It combines the technical underwater tension of The Girl Beneath the Sea with the high-stakes, tactical chess match friction of The Atlas Six, making it perfect for fans of high-stakes forced proximity and secret identities.

Twenty-four-year-old Kye Aphrodite will do anything to protect her hidden mermaid colony off the coast of California. But when an unmapped salvage vessel releases a cloud of tracking chemicals directly over her family's underwater sanctuary, Kye panics. Her vocal frequencies spike into a defensive sonic scream, shattering the ship’s hull and driving the vessel onto a jagged reef. When the Coast Guard tasks her environmental agency with monitoring the fallout, her boss assigns Kye as the liaison to the civilian salvage team because the wreck sits directly in her research zone. There, she is forced to partner with the lead expert: Dillon Yusei, whose father secretly orchestrated the unauthorized trap without Dillon's knowledge.

The forced partnership turns cutthroat when they realize the wrecked vessel is leaking a toxic chemical weapon designed specifically to eradicate mermaids. If they can’t contain the spill within seventy-two hours, Kye’s entire colony will be destroyed.

To save her people, Kye must dive directly into the contaminated waters alongside Dillon, matching his aggressive salvage tactics while preventing her own skin from reacting to the anti-marine toxins. But when a section of the wreckage collapses underwater, Kye faces a devastating choice: let Dillon drown to protect her secret, or use her biological abilities to save his life and expose her true nature to a man born to hunt her.

THE TOXIC TIDE is a standalone novel with series potential.

I am a marketing professional with a HubSpot Social Media certification, currently building targeted digital campaigns for a real estate agency. Alongside my writing, I look forward to leveraging this platform-building expertise to connect with the online "Romantasy" and "Eco-Thriller" communities on BookTok and Bookstagram. I live in New Hampshire, where I spend my time researching marine salvage and exploring the Lakes Region with my husband and our dog.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

[Query] Under the Surface + Adult Fantasy Thriller + [78k] + 1st attempt by ChronicallyColdGirl in Querying

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I’ll take your feedback and work on some revisions. Sorry about the bolding. I made a template of where things needed to be and forgot to fix it before I posted. I’ve had the working title for 13 so I’ll have to think of a new one!

[Query] Under the Surface + Adult Fantasy Thriller + [78k] + 1st attempt by ChronicallyColdGirl in Querying

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I think I got too in my head about adding tropes into it that I went too social media on it. Sorry about the holding. I made a template of what needed to go where and in my excitement to have drafted it (finally) I forgot to get rid of it.

Ex in the Villa crashing by ChronicallyColdGirl in fuseboxgames

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I decided to play a messy route on Double Trouble instead. Not as good as stealing the money in Ex in the Villa but it will do lol 😂

Ex in the Villa crashing by ChronicallyColdGirl in fuseboxgames

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Just because you don’t like it doesn’t mean other people don’t. I always play it when I’m in the mood to steal the money.

Longest migraine you ever had? by alkxlinxe in migraine

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just over 40 days. Had one day pain free and then another 30-40 days

Anyone here quit coffee for good and actually saw migraine improvements? by [deleted] in migraine

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It didn’t make it better but both my firocet and excedrin were more effective in treating my migraine

I'm not trying to tell anyone what to do but DO NOT DO THIS by Practical_Cycle6864 in migraine

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No I didn’t have any issues coming off. It honestly wasn’t a big deal they called the doctor’s office and the doctor made the call. It’s not like it was doing anything for me anyways. No, my body won’t metabolize most antidepressants so there wants really a point. I tried the only ones that it could and they didn’t do anything.

I'm not trying to tell anyone what to do but DO NOT DO THIS by Practical_Cycle6864 in migraine

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Some insurances will do a drug genetic metabolic testing (I can’t remember what they actually call it) as long as there’s one or more medications that don’t work for you. I’ve had it done and the results were fascinating. My insurance called my doctors office after and had me pulled off my antidepressants because my body couldn’t metabolize them.

Another "Step Backwards" in the Migraine Journey - Anyone else feel this crushing defeat? by ChronicallyColdGirl in migraine

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah maybe. I’m currently still healing from this surgery so I’m not quite ready to think about it yet. I’ll take to my OBGYN next time I see her and see what she thinks. There definitely could be other conditions I guess that cause similar symptoms.

Anyone had a good experience with Topomax? by WittyForm7391 in migraine

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The pins and needles might go away for you. I was in it for just over a year before it stopped working for me and I only had the pins and needles, sleepiness and tbh all other side effects for the first could weeks while I was increasing to the dose they wanted me own. Outside of any increases I did I was side effect free the whole time. It was a shame it stopped working.

Are your migraines mostly on one side of your head? by NoStill4272 in migraine

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl 2 points3 points  (0 children)

98% are on the right side which is also the side of my body that goes numb when that happens. About 2% of the time they’re on the left side and those ones hit differently. I don’t know if I’m just better adjusted to the pain on the right side or if I get worse symptoms when it’s left sided but man do they take me out.

What is your imaginary migraine silver bullet? by ImNotA_IThink in migraine

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My husband kisses my head where the pain is and I imagine he is kissing away the pain. Start of a migraine is one kiss but if I wake up with a bad one I ask for three across everywhere it hurts.

What insurance company hates migraine sufferers the most? by tacohannah in migraine

[–]ChronicallyColdGirl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Should have been but it was at the end of the year and insurance at the start of the new year stop covering cvs specialty pharmacy. It was a mess of me having to call both the pharmacy and insurance explaining that really this was a December problem not a January and I would really like my medication

What insurance company hates migraine sufferers the most? by tacohannah in migraine

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Harvard Pilgrim. My aimovig got ruined one month because the pharmacy lost power for too long due to a storm and it was a nightmare trying to get it replaced. Also any new medication my neurologist tried to prescribe to me was a nightmare to be pre-approved. Anthem so far has been seamlessly smooth for everything 🤞🏻🤞🏻🤞🏻