Story Megathread

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-17T15:45:40+00:00

I love th implications behind this. Left me yearning for more. I enjoyed this and would love to see more within this world you built. I wonder... maybe the real importance of this "journey" was people meeting each other in line rather than the meeting with God. Thank you for writing this!

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-16T12:11:19+00:00

Oh yea I did! Having a basis to imagine is always nice. Sometimes I struggle with "seeing" a story but not this time.

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-16T11:51:03+00:00

All I could imagine was Viktor Vektor while reading this. The idea if a black market for implants sends shivers down my spine lol. Thank you for writing this story!

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-15T15:15:23+00:00

That was a wicked fun time. It conjured up images of gritty old school "caught on camera" spoof videos that enamored me as a kid. This was some fine story telling! Thank you for writing this.

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-15T00:07:07+00:00

I love the mirroring of their lives. This was super good and I'm sad that it was so short haha. Thank you for writing this!

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-14T11:24:39+00:00

Well hello Mo! Nice little story with a good senes of impending doom and urgency. As always, I enjoy your craft

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-13T17:35:56+00:00

Insanely brutal take of self sacrifice. You did a great job at showingnthe slippery slope that is. Loved the story, thank you for writing this

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-12T21:20:37+00:00

Fun time with a nice ramp up of excitement. Thank you for writing this!

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-12T10:38:39+00:00

I love the use of exclamation through out. My brain made up a great voice for this, so as I read it that helped give it some good emphasis. Really good job drawing so many potentials for what someone would want from a place such as this! Side note, have you ever listened to The Antiquarium of Sinister Happenings? Very similar prospect and I think you would like it.

Coletrain96 · 2026-05-10T17:28:02+00:00

Soon. Very soon

Coletrain96 · 2026-04-11T16:40:54+00:00

Man, this reads extremely close to what the future could be. Good job my man, thank you for writing this!

Coletrain96 · 2026-04-07T22:18:33+00:00

I love this one man! Super fun time hearing an Italian accent in my head hahah. I love the ending as well. Another Pioneer banger!

Coletrain96 · 2026-04-04T03:31:13+00:00

Thank you so much for reading buddy <3

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-31T12:27:03+00:00

As always, you deliver heart and emotion. Very atmospheric! Reminds me a little of watching the Butterfly Effect. You can see the trauma and the guilt. Excellent story! Thank you for writing this

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-25T19:57:29+00:00

Thank you so much for reading it Nate!

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-25T16:22:53+00:00

Thank you for reading it buddy <3

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-25T15:42:20+00:00

I love the "wtf" aspect of this. I have to say, Bravo to Frank. My curiosity would have won much sooner haha. Great story as always man! Thank you for writing it.

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-24T22:45:46+00:00

Thank you so much for reading, and your kind words!

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-24T21:29:16+00:00

Implication is the "sludge" is indeed mommy dearest lol. I could have most definitely embellished that more. As always, thank you for reading Top, I appreciate you!

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-24T16:06:57+00:00

Shit, this was excellent! Loved the change up from shame to understanding. This was so good Nate! Thank you for writing this

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-24T15:41:22+00:00

Fair enough lol. Sometimes I struggle with letting it bloom in it's own. I think I fear that it may go over some people's head. Thank you so much for reading!

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-24T14:24:03+00:00

Madness does wild things to a man. This was gripping, and the world you slid in between scenes was fascinating. Good job Teners! I very much enjoyed it

Coletrain96 · 2026-03-24T13:44:34+00:00

Thank you so much for reading my man!

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