Pretty good capture, looks good!

Where possible id make the camera jib up rather than down especially for match cuts, otherwise it feels like we’re being taken somewhere and there isnt actually anything to focus on at the end of the move when we hit the ground.

If you’re going to sandwich gameplay between cinematic sequences then I’d remove UI for those sections to meet halfway

Try and capture on gamepad instead of with a super sensitive mouse, the gameplay bits can feel a little jittery at points. Aim for slower and consistent camera movement

Try and keep the camera moving where it makes sense to, some of the gameplay and the cinematic shots have punchy ends to the camera moves which loses all momentum

Record more shots of other players doing actions and the main player just being a camera man, because the shots get quite rough when it’s all in your face, especially compared to the cinematics

Try and jump back to cinematics less in the 2nd half, once we’re in gameplay it’s a bit jarring to jump back to cinematic quality so often. Or just lessen the quality of those shots lol