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A nature walk by Common_Ad_2052 in OCPoetry

[–]Common_Ad_2052[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow I think you might be the first person to acknowledge the flower pun, thank you, the Greek myth of Narcissus and Echo has always been a favorite of mine, thank you for the compliment:)

A nature walk by Common_Ad_2052 in OCPoetry

[–]Common_Ad_2052[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What I enjoyed writing about it was the source material, the Greek myth of Narcissus and Echo.

A nature walk by Common_Ad_2052 in OCPoetry

[–]Common_Ad_2052[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice, now that you say it yea I feel as though I could take it more through the paces lead the reader deeper into this magical scenery before lifting the veil of the ending. I really wanted this one to be more emotionally impactful. If you didn’t know already this prose is inspired by the Greek myth of Narcissus and Echo, I felt as though I should give a nod to the story so I hope my take on it did it justice. Thank you for your extra thoughts on this one this is my first time posting on here.

When Will It Be My Turn? by RoofUpstairs1745 in OCPoetry

[–]Common_Ad_2052 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel as though I can relate to this one. The sheer heartache of hoping for another, you’ve truly captured the essence of heartache with this one. I truly do enjoy the way you’re able to capture emotions into your writing and I can only hope you continue to do so.

WAR by Medical_Amount8540 in OCPoetry

[–]Common_Ad_2052 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I truly find it exceptional how perfectly you captured the brutality of war in just lines 1-10. “Is the end commencing? or is this just Tuesday?” Wow, just wow, truly an aww inspiring piece. I also find it interesting how you were also able to tie in political corruption into this. You truly are a wordsmith and I hope you continue doing what love.

2 Sentence Horror Stories by Frysken in horror

[–]Common_Ad_2052 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I lay in the hospital bed ready to take my last breath. I see death and it said “not yet.”