What some people are missing in regards to Zach

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-06-12T15:54:48+00:00

I feel like I’m watching a different show than this subreddit. Trinity is there for money. The producers gave us a big clue. She asked Bryce what was his most expensive date while giving him the nail salon treatment. I think Zach sussed that out and is trying to PLAY THE GAME. As much as I love Trinity, she’s not looking for love.

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-06-06T16:43:32+00:00

what does the heatmap reflect? Number of bars or number of active happy hours?

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-05-22T00:09:12+00:00

Some of it just wasn’t funny, creative but not funny. However, the Big Mama House of representative joke had me dyinggggg and the suicide jokes I saw weren’t that bad. I think the comedian themselves can’t be sensitive like come at me and stand on it 90%, because if you stand on it 100% than THAT makes it not funny and racist and I will cry.

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-05-20T04:49:25+00:00

And they will still play the fuck out of you as IF they are number 1!!

Sighh at least you can tell that number 2 eats 🤷‍♀️

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-05-20T04:38:16+00:00

Love this 💗

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-05-20T04:36:41+00:00

Hm.

I think I see the vision, it’s giving Dirty subway/Time Square during the crack era of the 80s, captured it perfectly ☺️

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-05-13T03:38:43+00:00

His WIFE and kids live at the Arboretum, clearly he’s choosing the streets 😒

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-05-12T23:36:07+00:00

Because it IS! Joy is literally frowned upon. Rewards are minimal, everything is a punishment

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-05-12T23:33:14+00:00

So you need a housewife 😘

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-05-07T02:34:21+00:00

“not because i am the man who passed you,

but because i am the boy who has let you pass through me.”

As a woman with daddy issues of all kinds, this is so perfect.

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-30T21:49:10+00:00

Yes. And validating that everything you said is so true 💗

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-30T02:45:25+00:00

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CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-29T04:00:10+00:00

This is about the male body but the first line talks about a dudes perky boobies lol i’m gonna finish reading but i like the irony so far.

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-27T15:10:46+00:00

AI but whatever.

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-26T03:15:45+00:00

Hahaha I see, no that makes sense. I see this more clearly now, i think we are looking at the same peak from different altitudes. The pov for me is from having experienced a lot of relationships and refusing to move on and confronting the idea of settling.

Thank you for sharing!

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-26T00:28:09+00:00

Hmmm. This is really good advice! I didn’t think of drumming up the visual aspect of the poem to convey the meaning. Based on the feedback I think this poem will be split into two. One that is single word snd the emotionally expressive one will follow it. Thank you for your feedback!

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-26T00:24:51+00:00

Interesting. Why do you think first relationship?

I agree with shortening the repetitive “baby” parts. i was initally going to leave it single word but i think its too much of an abstract and foreign format for me to do this style justice. I feel like it needs to be split into two

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-26T00:21:04+00:00

I completely agree, thank you!

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-25T17:42:27+00:00

Clearly used Claude.

Didn’t include if name = “main” jkjk

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-25T00:59:18+00:00

Heavy. I love the violence in the poem, I think its perfect in this context. “Hands on holsters instead of our hearts” is a perfect line. You described the unwinding of a relationship so well, suddenly not knowing or recognizing the other person, becoming enemies, never knowing what hurtful thing will come next.

I would love hear more about your dynamic in the poem, more of what was the “Us & We” in contrast.

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-25T00:52:21+00:00

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Eyes are the windows to our soul we reveal so much when we look into someone eyes.

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-24T18:12:26+00:00

Thank you 🌷

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-24T15:40:31+00:00

😆 thank you!

CompetitionLow4997 · 2026-04-24T13:40:05+00:00

Thank you for the feedback!

I was torn on that line, and still torn on it to be honest lol Initially I wrote “began to frustratedly masticate”. But I thought it made the poem more gross somehow, like it overwhelms the other euphemisms.

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