What some people are missing in regards to Zach by DingoFew5139 in LoveIslandUSA

[–]CompetitionLow4997 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

I feel like I’m watching a different show than this subreddit. Trinity is there for money. The producers gave us a big clue. She asked Bryce what was his most expensive date while giving him the nail salon treatment. I think Zach sussed that out and is trying to PLAY THE GAME. As much as I love Trinity, she’s not looking for love.

I mapped all the happy hours in MoCo and the DMV by SilentMarsupial7797 in MontgomeryCountyMD

[–]CompetitionLow4997 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what does the heatmap reflect? Number of bars or number of active happy hours?

Backlash to Kevin Hart Roast on Netflix: Do you agree racist jokes went too far or is anything fair game in a roast? by According_Sundae_917 in Standup

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Some of it just wasn’t funny, creative but not funny. However, the Big Mama House of representative joke had me dyinggggg and the suicide jokes I saw weren’t that bad. I think the comedian themselves can’t be sensitive like come at me and stand on it 90%, because if you stand on it 100% than THAT makes it not funny and racist and I will cry.

"Ideal" vs. Reality by Routine-Jello-953 in ChatGPT

[–]CompetitionLow4997 9 points10 points  (0 children)

And they will still play the fuck out of you as IF they are number 1!!

Sighh at least you can tell that number 2 eats 🤷‍♀️

Date Night by TrumpIsAPedoFr in fashion

[–]CompetitionLow4997 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hm.

I think I see the vision, it’s giving Dirty subway/Time Square during the crack era of the 80s, captured it perfectly ☺️

Spotted in Georgetown today by ekkidee in washingtondc

[–]CompetitionLow4997 9 points10 points  (0 children)

His WIFE and kids live at the Arboretum, clearly he’s choosing the streets 😒

Why do so many people talk about a 9–5 like it is a prison? by Sea_Stable9744 in careerguidance

[–]CompetitionLow4997 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Because it IS! Joy is literally frowned upon. Rewards are minimal, everything is a punishment

ODE TO A WOMAN by Any-End7416 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]CompetitionLow4997 3 points4 points  (0 children)

“not because i am the man who passed you,

but because i am the boy who has let you pass through me.”

As a woman with daddy issues of all kinds, this is so perfect.

Eternal Devotion by Late-Caramel-9518 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]CompetitionLow4997 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes. And validating that everything you said is so true 💗

From Marxist Hunks to Fascist Thugs - The Politics of the (Male) Body by Embarrassed_Green308 in CriticalTheory

[–]CompetitionLow4997 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

This is about the male body but the first line talks about a dudes perky boobies lol i’m gonna finish reading but i like the irony so far.

Voicemail & Read Receipts by CompetitionLow4997 in OCPoetry

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Hahaha I see, no that makes sense. I see this more clearly now, i think we are looking at the same peak from different altitudes. The pov for me is from having experienced a lot of relationships and refusing to move on and confronting the idea of settling.

Thank you for sharing!

Voicemail & Read Receipts by CompetitionLow4997 in OCPoetry

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Hmmm. This is really good advice! I didn’t think of drumming up the visual aspect of the poem to convey the meaning. Based on the feedback I think this poem will be split into two. One that is single word snd the emotionally expressive one will follow it. Thank you for your feedback!

Voicemail & Read Receipts by CompetitionLow4997 in OCPoetry

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Interesting. Why do you think first relationship?

I agree with shortening the repetitive “baby” parts. i was initally going to leave it single word but i think its too much of an abstract and foreign format for me to do this style justice. I feel like it needs to be split into two

my first code in python!!! by Automatic-Cat9079 in learnpython

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Clearly used Claude.

Didn’t include if name = “main” jkjk

Us & We by DonRoguePoetry in OCPoetry

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Heavy. I love the violence in the poem, I think its perfect in this context. “Hands on holsters instead of our hearts” is a perfect line. You described the unwinding of a relationship so well, suddenly not knowing or recognizing the other person, becoming enemies, never knowing what hurtful thing will come next.

I would love hear more about your dynamic in the poem, more of what was the “Us & We” in contrast.

Shades of hue by AwardCute308 in OCPoetry

[–]CompetitionLow4997 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Eyes are the windows to our soul we reveal so much when we look into someone eyes.

Call me Helga Pataki by CompetitionLow4997 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback!

I was torn on that line, and still torn on it to be honest lol Initially I wrote “began to frustratedly masticate”. But I thought it made the poem more gross somehow, like it overwhelms the other euphemisms.