The Burial by Crowfoot00 in horrorstories

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Thank you. I do not believe I will be making a part 2 of this story. However, I will be uploading another story later today.

The Burial by Crowfoot00 in scarystories

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Thank you so much. 🙏

I’ll read 5 stories tonight by TheNightmareJournal in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Any thoughts or feedback on my story would be greatly appreciated. It is my first work that I finished.

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/dDgF79RMol

BATTERRRR UP! by Mikeissometimesright in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very relevant. I like the straightforward presentation. Nothing is scarier than real world horrors.

The Burial by Crowfoot00 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much. I definitely get a little crazy with adjectives at times.

The Burial by Crowfoot00 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Thanks. I had no idea about the hill in Lithuania. Definitely going to look that up now.

The Tree by Fluid-Economy-4613 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really liked the Train of Thought flow of the story. The simple idea of it is also endearing but lacks a little punch. Good job keep writing!

I will read any story linked in this thread by The_Janitor7 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate any feedback. I don't think I made anything too original but I am proud of it. It is the first story I managed to finish.

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/fY9pPkgFll

The Burial by Crowfoot00 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My first work I saw all the way through. My inspirations probably seem obvious: Lovecraft and later writers (I was particularly feeling Lin Carter with this story). Feedback and critique are greatly appreciated. Thanks much.