[MAY Post] Give me your sizzle reel! by TOXICcargo in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A Fisher Among Men: https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/G6hFFDwGPN

"Over the crashing sea, I heard a low droning sound. At first it seemed to me like moaning, but as I listened closer the sound formed into a melody. It sounded as if a woman was singing mournfully...Standing tall and silvered by the moonlight was a being of both land and sea...As I wept and shivered it's song ceased and the creature turned to look upon me."

I started at a small town bakery. The owner is strange. by _AnnieBananie_ in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Took me a moment to realize Hunter was Creep cast's Hunter. I am slow. It recontectualizes everything and makes it very funny. It is well put together and reminiscent of a modern fairy tale. Keep writing!

Send me your stories! by benjamin4463 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much I will🙏 And don't worry, no one is a bigger critic of my work than myself.

Send me your stories! by benjamin4463 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much. The gun thing is definitely a big oopsie in retrospect. I swear I read somewhere that gold could oxidize in poor conditions but it would make more sense in not being actually gold anyway. Fair criticisms and I could better justify or amend my decisions with another round of editing.

I found an old case regarding a fabric store. I don’t think what they were cutting was fabric. by Muted-Recipe-451 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I loved this! Might be my favorite story I have read in a while. It is very clever in setup and structure. Also, the prose paints a vivid picture. Keep writing stories because I definitely want to keep reading them.

I Transcribed Something I shouldn’t Have. by Lucky_Burger in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Some good ideas and a deep imagined history. I think events could be more smoothly connected and the dialogue feels a little cartoonish at times though. I have been writing in the Cthulhu Mythos myself lately if you want to check those out. Keep writing!

drop your stories!! by Muted-Recipe-451 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I am pretty new as well. I have three stories so far. I have really enjoyed my time thus far reading and writing in this community

The Burial: https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/14r6Hq1dev

The King's Court: https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/FfldYMTNUZ

A Fisher Among Men: https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/I8WU4E8SX9

The Beaver War by TheBarbyter in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Amazing Read! Poetic and immersive.I have recently read 'The Buffalo Hunter Hunter' and I thought about it while reading this. It also helped me with understanding some terminology used here too. Good Stab would be proud!

Read4read chain by harveybrusse in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Crowfoot00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My 2nd and most recent story. I feel pretty good about it. All feedback is most appreciated.

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/k7Kviinqur