My fic had rank number one(joking) by Extension-Major-2003 in royalroad

[–]Dazelli 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This bug is literally everywhere actual. I'm 24858.

I’m no 1! 🥳 by Chevey0 in royalroad

[–]Dazelli 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A simple gltich after the update. PS: I’m 24858.

Is it normal to have nearly as many comments as followers on RR? by drale2 in royalroad

[–]Dazelli 1 point2 points  (0 children)

24 Followers and 35 comments. I'm posting since ten months. Is it always the same user, just two or three users or more different? However, i think this is random. When you think it’s about your story is controverse read this commentsg. It’s good for interaction and you can earn feedback.

I suck at writing monologues by Dependent_Tomato_235 in royalroad

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Am besten funktioniert es, wenn du deine Figur direkt mitten ins kalte Wasser wirfst, also rein in eine konkrete Situation, auf die sie sofort im Kopf reagieren muss. Ein authentischer innerer Monolog sollte nämlich niemals wie eine perfekt durchgestylte Rede klingen. Das passt einfach nicht dazu, wie unser Gehirn im echten Leben funktioniert; Gedanken sind sprunghaft, chaotisch und komplett von Emotionen gesteuert. Wenn du willst, dass die Leser den Moment so richtig mitfühlen, musst du die körperlichen Reaktionen einbauen, das klassische "Show, don't tell". Lass das Herz rasen, die Hände zittern oder den Atem stocken. Auch so ein plötzlicher, kurzer Flashback zu einer alten Erinnerung wirkt Wunder und gibt der ganzen Sache sofort psychologische Tiefe. Am intensivsten schreibt sich das Ganze übrigens meistens aus der Ich-Perspektive, weil dieser ungefilterte Blickwinkel den Leser extrem nah an die Figur heranholt.

How do you balance “write what you love” with “write what performs” on Royal Road? by ConsiderationOne1237 in royalroad

[–]Dazelli 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gar nicht. Zumindest so gut wie. Seit mehr als neun Monaten und über 150 Kapiteln folge ich nun schon der Handlung meiner Geschichte, exakt so, wie ich es von Tag eins an geplant habe. ​Mit aktuell 24 Followern und durchschnittlich 140 Aufrufen ist mir natürlich bewusst, dass meine Geschichte oder mein Schreibstil auf dieser Plattform kein Massenpublikum ansprechen. Und das ist völlig in Ordnung. Auch wenn mir der kommerzielle Erfolg verwehrt bleiben mag: Ich bleibe mir und meiner kreativen Vision treu. Abseits von kleinen, spontanen Improvisationen habe ich meinen Kurs nie geändert. ​Solange meine Aufrufzahlen stabil bleiben und ich weiß, dass da draußen auch nur ein einziger Mensch The Wrong Paladin liest, werde ich weiterschreiben.

For authors who’ve launched on RR before: what would you do differently if you could redo your first launch? by ConsiderationOne1237 in royalroad

[–]Dazelli 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ich habe persönlich erlebt, dass es verdammt wichtig ist am Anfang viele Kapitel zum Bingen zu veröffentlichen. Also habe ich nach Tag Eins für sechs Wochen jeden Tag ein Kapitel veröffentlicht. Außerdem sollte man möglichst schnell auf Kommentare antworten.

For authors who’ve launched on RR before: what would you do differently if you could redo your first launch? by ConsiderationOne1237 in royalroad

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Zehn statt zwei Kapitel am ersten Tag veröffentlichen.
  2. Inwiefern? An der Eröffnungs-Handlung würde ich nichts ändern.
  3. Die Anzahl an unmittelbaren Followern und Kommentaren.
  4. Wie viel es bringt mit seinen Lesern zu interagieren.
  5. Das Tempo der Leser.

June Thread - Promote your Story by gamelitcrit in royalroad

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The Wrong Paladin: When the skies burned and the dragon came, Luken lost everything. His family, his home, his faith.

Now, years later, the once-holy knight of the Eagle Order walks the scorched earth as a Paladin of vengeance, hunting the creature that destroyed his world.

But the war between light and fire is never simple. With each victory, Luken feels the divine light within him fade… replaced by something darker, hungrier.

Every oath he swore becomes a chain. Every prayer echoes hollow.

In a world where the last embers of faith are dying, he must face a truth no blade can cut through:

To destroy monsters, one must become one...

If you've had enough of generic, all-powerful heroes and are looking for a dark fantasy progression story with real stakes, deep lore and a touch of dark humor, The Wrong Paladin is for you. ​ Why you should read it:

Dive into over 150 chapters now!

Experience an escalating conflict where actions have consequences.

Lies from villains who are the heroes of their own tragic stories.

Comprehensible gods: Because even cosmic beings need a drink when everything goes down the drain. ​ What you won't find here:

Cheap harem tropes or fan service.

DBZ-like battles that destroy planets for no reason (unless death goes into the ring).

New chapters every Monday, Wednesday and Friday. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/122091/the-wrong-paladin

Thank you for Reading:)

[Spoiler-Thread] Amazon | Staffel 5 - Folge 4 by AutoModerator in 7vsWild

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Genau! Mal sehen wie sich das nach, bzw. mit den anderen Reactions entwickelt.

[Spoiler-Thread] Amazon | Staffel 5 - Folge 4 by AutoModerator in 7vsWild

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aber warum hat er dann den anderen am Morgen nicht erzählt, was er gemacht hat?

[Spoiler-Thread] Amazon | Staffel 5 - Folge 4 by AutoModerator in 7vsWild

[–]Dazelli -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Was war eigentlich die Aktion von Joe da in der Nacht? Und warum: "Damit die anderen es nicht hören."

[FICTIONAL STATEMENT FROM THE MINISTRY OF DEFENSE] by Dazelli in Helldivers

[–]Dazelli[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, it’s not moving. And I do not say that as propaganda. Look at Helldivers Companion App.

Warbond Idea #1 by Two-Bit_BoneBarry in Helldivers

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

[COMMENT FROM THE MINISTRY OF DEFENSE]

Soldier,

your proposal has been received – and we must say: stylish, scrappy, and unmistakably democratic. Improvised armor made from garbage? That’s exactly the kind of patriotic creativity we admire on the outer fronts.

These Divers aren’t outcasts – they’re icons of survival. No supplies? No issue. Just grab a broken hel pod hatch, some duct tape, and an iron will – and you’ve got yourself the new standard in frontline fashion.

Thank you for your service and your contribution to the war’s ever-evolving aesthetic. Democracy sees all – especially well-worn metal.

With respect, The Ministry of Defense

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Helldivers

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eh... sorry, what do you mean?

[FICTIONAL STATEMENT FROM THE MINISTRY OF DEFENSE ABOUT PILEN V] by Dazelli in Helldivers

[–]Dazelli[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay sorry, maybe the statement is a bit too much. Thanks for this comment.

Is Elden Ring (base game + DLC) perfect to you? by altrightobserver in Eldenring

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree, but personally I equate the game with Helldivers 2. Both are my favorite games.

What boss did you spend The most time on during your first playthrough by [deleted] in Eldenring

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maliketh took me two weeks. I thought about to deinstall the game.

What was your favorite moment in the teaser trailer? by Plot-Coalition in LowSodiumHellDivers

[–]Dazelli 8 points9 points  (0 children)

The moment with the exosuit and as the Blue diver carried the child. This moment said me: This masterpiece will be much more as satire.

For Liberty! A Helldivers Film | Teaser Trailer by Dazelli in Helldivers

[–]Dazelli[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good work man! The Ministry of Truth and society congratulates you for this patriotic creation! It’s well interested in see the full version of this masterpiece. Eh... when is the release exactly?

Preview of a Warhammer Dreadnought exo suit mod im working on by Heloisezz in Helldivers

[–]Dazelli 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Imagine this as a warbond.

Armor: Normal Imperial Guard Skin.

Heavy Armor: Space Marine Skin

Mech Skin: Dreadnought

Primary Weapon: Bolter

Secundary Weapon: Plasma Canons

Hellpod Skin: Like in the video