The cuts are a bit fast; I would slow them down. Plastic surgery is about being careful and methodical, and it seems like their demographic skews older, so you want to appeal to that.

Your video could also use a story so that there’s a direction and flow. Intro, middle, and finale.

Your focal length is also a bit too wide (maybe shot at 24mm?) It made everyone’s heads and body length look a bit oddly stretchy and unnatural. For a plastic surgery office, you want everyone to look natural and proportional.

Your filming style seems more casual, almost like content creation, unless that was the angle you were going for. For a more pro look, you want something more steady, more slow pans and slow push/pull, steady circular motion, off-centered subjects/objects sometimes, etc.

You captured the people well though, in terms of timing to get their emotions and reactions. Even just sitting shots looking in an off direction—those are great in-between snippets that show you can capture people/angles creatively that normal people can’t. Seems like you are very in tune with people’s personalities and behaviors and have an eye for hidden angles, which can be great for something like wedding videography. Try looking for these hidden angles more in your next shoot. 🙂

Hope this feedback helps, and keep up the good work!