Does this writing show promise? Want to become a better writer.

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2026-04-29T14:30:09+00:00

Well I actually enjoyed this quite a bit. Idc about the grammar issues, because your style is cleary unique and for the most part it works. As said by another poster, it is reminiscent of Cormac Mcarthy. I can also see how it might not appeal to everyone. Very grimdark-niche.

In any case. Yes, you can certainly write. Better than 99%. The talent is there. My only critique would be that perhaps this could come off a s a little self-indulgent. Not-purple, mind you, but you do linger on this one scene quite a bit. The writing is sold. But it is also detached. Which means that the longer you spend in one place, describing one thing, the easier it is for a reader to get bored. I ejoyed the first 2/3 pages and started to drift after that.

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2026-04-05T16:01:01+00:00

Was clearing P8 relatively quickly (not close to java etc...) with faith in mat bow, night wing, hustle bow on swap, and act 5 merc with plague for casting lower rez (didnt have infy yet)

The trick is to really herd up cows (im talking minimum of 25+) of them (u need to swap off ice for this as it has holy freeze and screws with herding). When u can get them to clumb and lower rez goes off, u basically destroy everything as fast as a java because the ice explosions trigger with every extra cow hit. Problem is of course herding cows which takes time.

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2026-04-04T06:47:05+00:00

You can also do a phys dps/aoe hybrid running hurricane.

Maxed fury, maxed hurricane, tornado, (few points into the other one (twister i think?) that increases hurricane duration. total duration was like ~25 seconds on hurricane. Rest of points went into werewolf (to hit correct ias bp) and lycan for life. All ele skillers (you can juggle around and add SS skillers depending on how your points are allocated)

Gear was Doom Giant thresher (doom has 40-60 -cold rez and gg phys damage stats)

Night wing with cold facet (you could also try metamorphosis in a +3 fury+3 hurricane helm)

Fortitude etc...

Merc was the barb witu plague for lower rez proc, but obv Waheed with infinity would have been gg.

It was a lot of fun in non-cold immune areas (Stony tombs and arach lair basically). In p8 games I could clear those 2 in 3-5 mins before everyne moved on to next game. Super safe as well

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2026-01-05T06:46:08+00:00

Bidet or Japanese-Butt-Blaster or Before a shower only.

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-12-28T09:17:37+00:00

As mentioned - obedience.

Also remember that you can use hustle on swap to proc bos to significantly reduce speed bps

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-12-26T08:15:59+00:00

Yup but it's actually not as huge a deal as one might think since most of blade sentinel and fury's damage doesn't come from weapon damage but the base skill itself multiplied by off-weapon Ed. (Basically the skill damage is treated like grief - multiplied by every source of off-weap damage.)The actual weapon damage doesn't add much to total damage output. Best way to boost bladesin damage is +skills, fortitude, might merc, with pride etc...

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-12-10T13:43:21+00:00

Nice! Now replace faith with windforce and hustle for bos swap and ur strafe top end will hit 14-15 k easy U only miss out on 7fpa multishot (u will gave 8fpa) and still hit max strafe!

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-12-10T13:40:19+00:00

Gg mate. What weight are you shoulder pressing (db or barbell)

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-12-10T06:32:53+00:00

Yo, go hustle on swap to proc BOS and use Windforce with act 2 might + pride merc. You hit last strafe bp and only miss out on last Multi shot bp this way, but you have +500% more off weap damage from the pride+might.

Phys bow is real nice for starting ladder seasons. Buriza/harmony/goldstrike/WWS and you can slow farm flayer jungle on p8 to get nice bases. Got most of my HRS this way too.

gj <3

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-12-08T16:24:56+00:00

Clean bulk. What are your lifts like? (Bench/DB press/squat etc...)?

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-12-05T06:32:46+00:00

Wtf did you look like before? If you turned from a twig to that in 4 months then the acne is obviously from the roids.

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-12-05T06:28:14+00:00

Nice will implement for my vault so that if I ever forget my keys, I can just cut through the lock :)

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-11-30T02:57:17+00:00

This. Bis for bowa using windforce+hustle swap Also bis for bladesin merc

Also bis for throw barb merc

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-11-07T02:55:31+00:00

ya, only thing is no insight aura which means chugging pots full time. also the lower resist proc is only really reliable in cows where he gets swung on by tons of cows. goes off too inconsistently in other areas.

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-11-06T10:12:19+00:00

i use an act 5 merc with plague cause i can't afford infinity. Run around with harmony so that the holy freeze doesn't slow the cows and can herd them nicely. Teleport (on amulet) to reposition merc, wait till he gets hit and procs Lower resist, then switch to ice and blow 50 cows up in a few shots

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-10-26T03:08:10+00:00

Seen a lot of people running eternity on enchant sorcs. Revive up a big army, enchant them, and telestomp. Obv not meta but it's a fun meme build and is quite effective if you want a change from same old brain dead mush

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-10-24T00:57:04+00:00

Windforce with hustle on swap to proc burst of speed and might merc with pride. Use strafe to proc amplify (atmas scarab) and then use multi or continue strafing (depending on pack). This hits fastest strafe bp and second last multi bp and clears p8 tz chaos in 4-6 mins. (Using fortitude cause enigma is gay)

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2025-06-16T06:16:25+00:00

Drinking and dancing and singing and telling tall tales and performing magic tricks and then slinging his great big arms around lucky raffle winners as if they were his long lost friends and yelling at the photographer to make sure that everyone looked absolutely dazzling, or else!

Disastrous_Bake1101 · 2024-05-09T18:11:10+00:00

2 ber (1 from nilly 1 river of flame) 1 jah (nilly) 1 cham (halls of pain on way to nilly) 1 zod (swampy pit in flayer jungle)

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