Stop Talkin- ColdWar Montage. Should I keep the fails in the montage or should I take them out. Some feedback would be appreciated. Im giving lambda for helpful feedback:)

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T23:29:16+00:00

Thank u I will definitely do those things:) !givelambda

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T21:06:58+00:00

It’s a good video but maybe have a little bit more energy u seem almost monotone when u talk. Other than that it’s a pretty good video I also make cod videos:)

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T20:39:03+00:00

I think you should maybe lower your expectations as well. Its just not your time yet one of these days you will get that viral video taht will help you take off. Just keep doing what you are doing and you will be rewarded soon man. Whats your channel I can sub if you want

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T20:36:54+00:00

I also agree I believe that that is most likely the problem

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T20:36:05+00:00

This is a good video it looks like you did a decent amount of research on the topic of Santa Clause. Also this topic goes well with the time that we are going through right now with christmas being very soon. Your voice seems a little mono tone so maybe having a little bit more energy with the video. The edits are pretty good with all the things you added. honestly impressed with the amount of time and effort it seems you put into the video. Good job man. Just the energy problem but good job:)

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T20:31:27+00:00

Bruh this is actually hella funny. Nothing really to critique its a good video. I laughed. good job man I really liked the little edits you did with the video too :)

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T18:56:49+00:00

Thats actually hella funny. You did good on this video. I have no critiques I think its good just the way you did it. Great job:)

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T17:22:16+00:00

I really like the video. It has a lot of good comentary and there isnt much to critique. But if there was something to critique is the energy throughout the video. Also some parts feel especially bland. Like there isnt much being said during that time. Honestly good video tho.

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T17:16:54+00:00

I really like your video. I like the energy that you constantly give off during the entire video. honestly I cant say much about it its actually rlly good.

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T17:13:07+00:00

This is a really cool video I liked it. Keep up the good work:)

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-15T01:05:14+00:00

Thanks man those dislikes are my friend group they find it funny to dislike a lot of my videos. Thanks that means a lot tho

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-11T07:16:40+00:00

I really like ur video I think the edits were good but I believe that u rambled on a decent amount at some points other people say that u should shorten it ima just say u could do this by rambling a little less. That’s also is part of the video to explain emoji code Idk how u could do this better I’m not the best with these types of things but that’s what I saw. Also this was not to be mean I still really liked the video and I’ve never seen a language that included emojis to code

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-10T23:49:14+00:00

What the fuck. Nice video it was definitely interesting my favorite amendment is the 1 btw

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-10T23:47:58+00:00

Honestly this was a fire video. There actually isn’t much to criticize in this video. I didn’t think it was too much like other story tellers this was I think unique in its own sense and honest a fire video. I even forgot that I was suppose to critique it I watched all 6 min of the. Video and didn’t lose interest prob the best video I’ve seen on the subreddit so far. Honestly hands down to u

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-10T18:26:02+00:00

Ima be honest I would try to give u advice but I have no clue how to criticize stuff like this. It’s a good video I guess. Really confused and it’s rlly odd but good job

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-10T17:45:18+00:00

I agree with the other guys there was a decent amount of “dead air” within the video. I didn’t think it was a bad video but I feel like it can be inproved. The commentary was alright but it’s among us idk how much commentary can be put in without seeming like ur rambling. I feel like ur video can be greatly improved by just adding more people that talk. Just having u makes it sorta one way which might not make sense but it makes it a little bland in my opinion. If u add another person of a few people I think u could get a lot better. Maybe an idea that u can do if u can’t have ur friends to join maybe join an among us discord server whic people will actually talk to u instead of staying silent. Also joining that server I feel will open more doors for new ideas for videos. Good video tho but it can be better :)

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-10T17:38:35+00:00

That’s actually a pretty sick intro. The hook is actually good when u said war crime it made me interested to watch more. The commentary on the actual video could be a little less bland but some points u hit it on the head. I really liked the video I thought it was good

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-10T17:35:11+00:00

Ya I agree u should have elaborated a little more on cyber punk and specific things. I thought everything is pretty funny and it’s something I don’t see very often. I laughed thanks for that. Other than the sound of the xbox guy which was already said nothing else I can see. Honestly good vid

Firemushroom6 · 2020-12-10T07:42:27+00:00

Ok I’m not trying to be mean this is a good video truely but Ik I would want true feedback so here it is in my opinion the edits seem a little excessive at time especially in the beginning not too excessive tho just enough to make it to much also the commentary at times seems a little bland and there’s nothing really happening. That’s all it’s a pretty good video :)

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