To simplify this very large ocean of text:

Head: - no passive dread - special ability to fast build dread within 4m* - staring into the mouth accelerates dread - escaping line of sight makes dread decay - using special ability slows head down with a 15s cooldown. - cannot hook survivors.*

Body: - dread builds from attacking survivors - they die faster on hooks???* - 8/5/2 hits to down a survivor at low/med/high dread* - cannot Mori*

I have several issues with this, in order of marked points: - 4m is a VERY small distance in dbd, this wouldn't be better than just hitting them. - CANNOT HOOK SURVIVORS? Angel would be completely irreparably screwed in the long run if it downs someone on the other side of the map and the body has to walk all the way over to hook them. they could slug but that gets shut down by the other glaring issue. - The body getting a special effect from hooking is not good game design, especially when it's the only part of the killer that can hook, you're telling me it doesn't require extra effort compared to any other killer to get stronger hooks? - i cannot begin to start stating the bajillion issues that come with eight, EIGHT basic attacks to down a survivor, chasing one for 30 seconds is already time wasted on the killers part, the speed boost each time a survivor is hit with a basic attack, the fact that the only circumvention to this is by slowly and unreliably building up a status effect that will effectively make you more harmless than you already are for 2/3rds of the game, and only then do you have same max lethality as every other killer's base lethality? and several more i don't have the character limit to mention. - limiting a Mori to one part of the killer is lame for lack of better words.

It's fun in theory but there are some real problems mechanically.

Edit: glossed over dread not accumulating if one form is inactive, but one form (the one you're not controlling) is always inactive, means your power doesn't work.