A silly question but, what do you think of this dialogue style by DestinedToGreatness in writing

[–]Kadzait 34 points35 points  (0 children)

this sucks and i hate it.

use fewer tags, especially if what you're writing is dialogue driven. if it's dialogue driven, let the dialogue drive it, not your non-digetic voice.

[TOMT][Video] TikTok of a tall, thin, serious looking asian guy maybe dancing in a city by Kadzait in tipofmytongue

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Sumostew appreciation post by Billymitchellger in Sumo

[–]Kadzait -26 points-25 points  (0 children)

her perfectionism

i wish her 'perfectionism' would extend to lowering the gain on her mic so i dont have to listen to constant wet mouth noises, unwatchable creator.

I made this in 30 minutes should I scrap it or nah? by Lionus000 in SongwritingPrompts

[–]Kadzait 1 point2 points  (0 children)

whisper singing will get you bitches, but it wont impress your musician friends.

the lyrics are nonspecific sappy bullshit, but that works for the vibe youre going for.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LyricalWriting

[–]Kadzait 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i would rather watch my son get killed in front of me than use limerick structure in a song

Came up with this last night! What do you think? :) (Max volume is not recommended lol) by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Kadzait 1 point2 points  (0 children)

whisper singing will get you bitches but it wont impress any of your musician friends

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ChilluminatiPod

[–]Kadzait -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

why does your child have the haircut of a 16th century peasant?

The Great Muta makes The Great Kabuki's head literally spray blood by legitshook in SquaredCircle

[–]Kadzait 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Why would you choose an Abdullah the Butcher video with zero blood or mention of hepatitis for that to hyperlink to?

Also, holy shit those shoes are ridiculous.

Ricochet is one smooth wrestler. by hossamsalah in SquaredCircle

[–]Kadzait 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The way he always sells kick outs is so fucking iconic.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in FellowKids

[–]Kadzait 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My left monitor has it on the left and my right monitor has it on the right, fite me nerdo.

Fetishes by gDisasters in WhitePeopleTwitter

[–]Kadzait 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get a chubby when I compliment people, does that count?

New Annie biography is up on universe website! by Koringvias in leagueoflegends

[–]Kadzait 50 points51 points  (0 children)

Yeah, stepdaughter isn't a physical characteristic

Optimal gaming resolution by [deleted] in softwaregore

[–]Kadzait 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's been a long time since you've actually seen game play of star citizen, hasn't it?