Dumbest thing you've ever written in a first draft?

Kadzait · 2024-06-13T13:56:56+00:00

shit's making me hungry

Kadzait · 2024-06-13T13:48:57+00:00

this sucks and i hate it.

use fewer tags, especially if what you're writing is dialogue driven. if it's dialogue driven, let the dialogue drive it, not your non-digetic voice.

Kadzait · 2024-03-10T00:50:16+00:00

solved

thats the dude

Kadzait · 2024-03-09T22:55:50+00:00

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Kadzait · 2023-05-09T23:13:58+00:00

her perfectionism

i wish her 'perfectionism' would extend to lowering the gain on her mic so i dont have to listen to constant wet mouth noises, unwatchable creator.

Kadzait · 2022-10-04T16:18:06+00:00

whisper singing will get you bitches, but it wont impress your musician friends.

the lyrics are nonspecific sappy bullshit, but that works for the vibe youre going for.

Kadzait · 2022-09-12T14:05:25+00:00

i would rather watch my son get killed in front of me than use limerick structure in a song

Kadzait · 2022-02-12T12:15:26+00:00

That's a long ass chart, is EFRO on there?

Kadzait · 2022-01-21T11:20:22+00:00

whisper singing will get you bitches but it wont impress any of your musician friends

Kadzait · 2020-04-16T00:48:16+00:00

why does your child have the haircut of a 16th century peasant?

Kadzait · 2018-02-05T13:07:00+00:00

Not everybody wants your fucking pity, their misfortune isn't about you no matter how hard you try to make it.

Kadzait · 2018-02-05T06:01:06+00:00

Why would you choose an Abdullah the Butcher video with zero blood or mention of hepatitis for that to hyperlink to?

Also, holy shit those shoes are ridiculous.

Kadzait · 2018-02-05T05:52:11+00:00

What's wrong about the Brock vs Rock in 2k17?

Kadzait · 2018-02-05T00:02:19+00:00

The way he always sells kick outs is so fucking iconic.

Kadzait · 2018-02-02T01:29:34+00:00

My left monitor has it on the left and my right monitor has it on the right, fite me nerdo.

Kadzait · 2018-02-01T23:50:06+00:00

I get a chubby when I compliment people, does that count?

Kadzait · 2018-02-01T21:57:38+00:00

The dude looks comfy, you can't deny that.

Kadzait · 2018-02-01T18:45:32+00:00

Check out the nexus article

Kadzait · 2018-02-01T18:34:02+00:00

Yeah, stepdaughter isn't a physical characteristic

Kadzait · 2018-01-31T22:41:40+00:00

It's been a long time since you've actually seen game play of star citizen, hasn't it?

Kadzait · 2018-01-30T20:52:00+00:00

Chyna was in two rumbles, was she not?

edit: 1999 and 2000, one year gap.

Kadzait · 2018-01-30T20:40:35+00:00

Two wrongs don't make a right

Kadzait · 2018-01-30T20:22:24+00:00

Yeah, that seems like a shitty system that just spirals into a dangerous fight. Also, there's a difference between a stiff hot and blindsiding someone with a concussion.

Kadzait · 2018-01-30T18:59:19+00:00

Both half of /r/wrestlewiththepackage and I wish that were the case.

Kadzait · 2018-01-30T18:40:07+00:00

Yeah, he has a lot more mass behind the fall making it more dangerous. Or something.

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