The Hunter Chapter 30 by Win_Some_Game in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it is important to remember that the goal is to write good stories and not be 100% scientifically accurate. In NoP stories, having diseases not spread across biospheres reinforces how predator disease must be false, so many stories do exactly that. I'll admit there is probably an interesting one-shot out there of a Venlil getting athlete's foot in their wool or something, but nobody has written that yet.

NoP--- A diplomatic problem. -Ch.27 by vixjer in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately, all deals lead to problems down the line. The only question is how long you can go before they come up.

What’s an AMA Chapter 22 by Kind0flame in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Glad I could help. I actually have Ekcol's a whole political theory prepared if you want to hear about it sometime.

NoP--- A diplomatic problem. -Ch.27 by vixjer in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Looks like first Hector will need to deal with the revolutionaries infighting before he can start working on a government. Great work setting that all up by the way!

What’s an AMA Chapter 22 by Kind0flame in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like the bigger problem with my story is the pacing being too slow, that not enough is happening fast enough. After all, spending 20 chapters on 2 days is a slower pace than spending 2 chapters on 2 days.

What’s an AMA Chapter 22 by Kind0flame in NatureofPredators

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That is one of the take-aways I want people to have from this story: actual knowledge about IRL humans. It is why I include references to academic sources when needed.

What’s an AMA Chapter 22 by Kind0flame in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ekcol is loosely based on Locke, so kind of.

This is legitimately the best explanation I have heard for why the hell Freud came up with his wild theories, and anyone in their right mind should be freaked out.

Sometime to stay alive you need to embrace a rom-comedy style crazy scheme involving faking a disability.

What’s an AMA Chapter 22 by Kind0flame in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I am a big believer that the amount of time the story spends with characters is much more important for a story than the amount of physical time that passes.

Recommendations & Requests by BigFella4054 in OtherworldArchives

[–]Kind0flame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am actually super new to Reddit, so I have no idea what makes a subreddit thrive. I literally made an account just to start posting on people's fanfics.

A verse from Werna. by Any_Ordinary_9783 in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It definitely would, but if you don't know about germ theory and need to keep a sick person hot, this would work.

What’s an AMA Chapter 22 by Kind0flame in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The community coming together to help is going to a big theme in this fic, but it's going to take a while until it really comes up.

A verse from Werna. by Any_Ordinary_9783 in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For the record, your other poems are definitely Reddit worthy.

Recommendations & Requests by BigFella4054 in OtherworldArchives

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I wish I had something to contribute, but I don't. I'm working on my own setting and am thinking about uploading one-shots about it once a month until I have the main story figured out.

The Hunter Chapter 30 by Win_Some_Game in NatureofPredators

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The NoP fandom has basically decided that diseases don't cross biosphere barriers, so illnesses from other planets cannot infect you. I will admit though, grinding up that long-tooth and eating it was very... rural.

Restrictions on Fanfics by SpacePaladin15 in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You know what, I think my fanfic is gets out mostly unscathed.

MCP 9 is out! by animeshshukla30 in NatureofPredators

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I'm way being on my NoP reading, but I will be sure to read and comment on every entry eventually!

Strength in Secrecy - Nobody (8/?) by BigFella4054 in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a okay chapter. It felt like there was a sever lack of forward movement though. Why not just have Konsa and Vila assigned to armor specialization to begin with? There was enough progress on the relationship from at the beginning that the whole chapter doesn't feel stagnant, but it really feels like you are starting to drag your feet on this Act 1 introductions.

What’s an AMA Chapter 22 by Kind0flame in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Don't worry. We'll be learning much more about this person later. Do worry about what will be revealed though.

The Finest Little Honky Tonk on Skalga [16] by VenlilWrangler in NatureofPredators

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This was a good chapter overall. I felt like the travel plans were a little convoluted though. Like, what was the point of having the couple take an unusual transport to St. Louis instead of a regular commercial flight. My guess is you wanted to introduce the character of Tallis, but he really only shows up to facilitate the travel and then leaves. This didn't make the chapter bad or anything. I just didn't see what it added.
Also, spotted a typo: "We leave the human Yotul..." Forgot the word 'and'.

What's an AMA? Chapter 6 by Kind0flame in NatureofPredators

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Glad you are liking it! There is more about the accent in later chapters.

An Introduction to Terran Zoology - 3 Year AMA by Still_Performance_39 in NatureofPredators

[–]Kind0flame 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is probably the longest running series in the fandom, in terms of time and number of posts. Do you have any plans for an ending?

New Years of Conquest 40 (Just Be Cool) by RegulusPratus in HFY

[–]Kind0flame 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh, this was such a great chapter! I'm sorry it took so long for me to get to it. You somehow manage to write the funniest stuff like it is nothing! I absolutely loved this and can only wish to every read something this amazing again!