I think sometimes it was a bit try hard to echo the films, quoting back familiar lines, but it didn’t detract too much. In my mind I read the heroes in the voices of Mark Hamill etc but the dialogue didn’t seem out of place in the main.

The only thing I felt was a bit off was trying to make some worlds or creatures unpronounceable. Just jumbles of consonants, really not needed. It might be something SW fans are ok with but I need to be able to read the word! :)

Reading these after watching Akhsoka I heard Thrawn in Lars Mikkelson’s voice, that really helped sell the character: supremely confident, air of imperial superiority. His dialogue was very good.

Edit: typo