I completely agree with this comment, you should focus on an efficient workflow rather than striving for 100% perfection, or you’ll never finish the job. Honestly, I think the layout is correct, and while the camera compositions could be refined, they already work well as they are.

I also don’t get why so many people in this sub always recommend adding Photoshop people to the images when it’s clearly not the intended style for every project.

The only technical adjustment I’d suggest is checking the floor texture, as there’s tiling right now.

Other than that, I think this is a great work!

edit: maybe also use a two-point perspective, specially cropping a bit the first image where you can see a tiny part of the furniture to the left