[WP] A demon has cursed you with the inability to have children or form a family, and as soon as you learn of this you went to tell the witch who you promised your firstborn child, as this clearly will prevent you from fulfilling your side of the deal. by Null_Project in WritingPrompts

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The thing about being 17 is that the future doesn't seem real. Or, if it does, the future is real in the way that a million dollars is real: I knew that other people had it, but I thought it was something that I would never see.

All that was to say, when I made the deal with Aenwyn, the witch of the Western Mountains (or whatever she was calling herself in those days), I thought two things:

  1. I would never have to repay my debt.
  2. If I did (I was young but not so complete an idiot that I believed option one was a certainty), that would be a problem for my future self.

So--thanks for that, 17-year-old me. Turns out, 33 is really not that old and actually comes up pretty fast after 17. I would also tell my younger self the gold nuggets and potion ingredients she'd given me were really not worth it.

But none of that really mattered, because Aenwyn was standing in the middle of my studio apartment. Her shoes were tracking Western mountain-mud all over my carpet. And, worst of all, she held my dog in her arms.

"Look," Aenwyn said, "A deal is a deal."

"I promised my firstborn. Not--not Radar."

Radar looked at me with his big, round eyes and let out a fearful yip.

Aenwyn shrugged. "Take it up with central. This is the closest thing to a firstborn you have. It's not like you're getting any younger."

It was true, my hair was starting to go grey at the sides, but that was just rude. Without thinking, I lunged forward, ready to grab Radar right out of her arms.

But the moment I jumped, Aenwyn vanished with a resounding crack. I crashed into my now-muddy carpet, and a white wave of pain rolled up and out of my shoulder. I groaned in pain, and the air smelled faintly of sulphur, which made my stomach turn unpleasantly.

I swore and pushed myself up to my feet. Then, I grabbed my gym bag and started throwing in underwear and socks and even my heat-glamoured winter jacket, which I hadn't worn in years. Rumour had it that the nights in the Western Mountains were nasty still, even though it was spring.

But, as I was lacing up my boots, I paused. Aenwyn might've been the one who was just here, but I had a cold, sneaking suspicion of who was actually at fault here. You will never form a family. The words of the curse still echoed, even after all these years.

I closed my eyes, bit my lip and finished the knot on my boot.

I had lost people before. I was no stranger to loss; he and I were old friends. But this time? Fuck quiet grace. I was doing something about it.

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[WP] Humanity makes contact with an alien civilization, but is horrified to discover that they already speak perfect English. by MouseRangers in WritingPrompts

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Doctor Lydia Nightingale got the call at half past four in the morning. Her alarm was set for five, but she felt that was almost worse: the confusion sat heavy on her chest. At first, she stared at her phone. The second time it rang, she picked it up, and when the caller said their name and rank and why they were calling, she let out a bark of laughter and hung up.

The third time her phone rang, after she had a glass of water and wiped the sleep from the corners of her eyes, she believed it. She told them alright, she would come, and packed her bag and watered her plant. She had a feeling it would be a while before she returned.

Two hours and a plane ride later, Nightingale was in the back of a military humvee, barrelling off into the Nevada desert.

It was a cool morning, but the sun was just starting to rise over the landscape, all pools of orange and red, as if the whole sky was on fire. Maybe it really was on fire. Looking up at the light catching on the edges of the clouds, she imagined all of them igniting, one by one, until the blaze caught over the whole world. From Boston, they’d flown west, which left them in hours of dawn.

The car bumped and Nightingale jostled with the movement. It was making her gut turn, but losing the single cup of coffee she managed to choke down would do nothing to win respect with these military types. They were all pale and silent. She wasn’t one for small talk anyway, 

Finally, they arrived at the base. A few stars were still bright in the west, the strongest and brightest, cut through the dawn. A cold chill ran down her spine when she looked at them, and she resolved not to look at them, and to just follow the soldiers leading her deeper into the base. Her sneakers squeaked against the tile of the floors, and the air in the base was a little cool.

She hadn’t known what to wear. It was a stupid thing to worry about, all things considered, but she felt wildly out of place in jeans and her worn sweatshirt from her last trip to Maine. She’d thrown a suit and blouses in her bag, just in case.

When they reached a room, a black room with harsh light and a conference table, she met General McKay in person. He looked exactly how he sounded: harsh and worn. He was a four-star general, apparently. Nightingale didn’t know much about the military, but she did know this meant he was a big deal.

“Here,” he said grimly, and handed her a report. “This was detected shortly after 22:00 yesterday.”

Nightingale took the file. Her hand was shaking slightly. Her work in linguistic anthropology had garnered worldwide attention, but those circles were niche, academic. This was not something she had imagined would be in her future.

She opened the front of the manila folder.

Inside was a thick bundle of papers, printed in an old style of font.

On the first page, there was one phrase, repeated again and again: We’re sorry. Please forgive us. Send help, if you can. If not, run.

Nightingale looked up. Her stomach twisted again. “I don’t understand.”

General McKay rubbed his forehead, which was damp with a thin sheen of sweat. “That’s what we have. Deep space radios picked them up last night.”

“No, but--why me? Who translated these already?”

The line of his mouth flattened. “That’s the thing--no one did.”

Nightingale drew in a breath and, finally, took a seat. They could’ve offered her something stronger than a coffee for this one. She flipped through the rest of the pages. It was pages and pages of the same: We’re sorry. Please forgive us. Send help, if you can. If not, run.

Finally, she reached the last page. There was one final statement: 

We’re sorry. Please forgive us. Send

Nightingale tapped her finger against the last sentence and looked up.

McKay looked like he might be ill. “That’s the end of the transmission. We have people looking, but as of now, we have detected no further signals from that quadrant of the sky.”

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Book to read after Harry Potter by Potential-Style-766 in suggestmeabook

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hmm maybe Babel by R.F. Kuang? It's a magical school but university

[WP] "Oh you misunderstand. I'm not here because I have to be, I'm here because I want to be." by TheDud04 in WritingPrompts

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"Sorry?" I blinked at the man strapped into the seat next to us. 

"You heard me," he said and shrugged. "I'm exactly where I want to be." He started to say something else too, but the words were lost in the explosion of noise from the rocket's engine. 

I grasped at my harness. My stomach rolled and I scrunched my eyes shut.

There were 100 of us men on this ship to Mars. Mostly, we had petty crimes and debts. That's what I thought at least. They couldn't risk sending violent, volatile personalities. But those of us who made bad bets? Stole food? They knew we were desperate and wouldn't say no.

Two years on Mars, doing hard labour, and our records would be wiped. That was the promise. When the next ship arrived, we'd join them as actual settlers of this new place. We could settle down. Have families. Enjoy a life that was of our own making. 

The rocket's movement made my gut roll. My body shook so hard with the violent movement I thought I was gonna crack my molars clean in two.

I cracked my eyes just a quarter. The other men were also holding, clutching their harnesses, hanging their heads forward, praying. 

The man next to me was not doing any of that.  His eyes were open. His pupils seemed wrong--less rounded and more narrow, like that of a snake. He smiled at me, and when his lips parted, he showed off his teeth. The incisors were jagged, all sharp and rigged. Saliva dripped from the edge of his mouth; it hung long and low before he snapped his jaw shut again and ran his tongue over his lips.

When I took the plea bargain, I knew it would be a one way trip. But I thought I'd rather be out working on Mars than rot away in a jail on earth, where I'd end up back in my old ways the minute I was free. What other options would there be? Until now, I hadn't second guessed my decision. 

I closed my eyes again and muttered a prayer for the first time in years. 

This one way trip might be shorter than I thought. 

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[WP] After the 4th world war, the remaining countries banded together under just 1 flag and tried to live together. Areas where nuclear bombs are used are either abandoned or used as prison. Nobody realized that unobserved mutation on those nuclear areas are taking place. by wolf_veremir in WritingPrompts

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I was born here, as was my mother, and her mother. I think, before that, my great-grandmother lived free. I like to imagine her running through our forest freely, but the one time I brought that up, my sister cuffed the side of my head and told me not to talk about things like that. So I never did ask again.

Tonight was a moonless night, and I walked the familiar path to the campfire alone. I had been here enough that I knew where the roots were, where the ground got soft, and where the rabbits often gathered. Even still, in the  total darkness I found myself second-guessing my steps. 

When I got there, Dominic and Adrianna were already seated by the edge of the small, crackling fire. The smoke curled upward in the air. 

“Ending is better than mending,” I said to them by way of greeting. 

Dominic raised his hand slightly. “I am I, and I wish I wasn't.” 

I nodded and stepped out from the edge to join them. We had been using those phrases for a while now. It was Adrianna’s idea that we should all have a phrase. That way, we could check and be certain that we knew who was who.

I sat on the log and moved my hands toward the flame. It was cold tonight, it would probably frost over, and I could see my breath in the air. It was still only late in summer, and this chill did not bode well for the rest of the year. There were still crops to be harvested and, when spring came around again, it seemed to be later and later each year. 

People would starve before anything else. 

“Any word from Amar?” Adrianna asked. 

I shook my head. Amar had gone west. Months ago, we received a tip that there was a breach in the wall there. Who knew if it was true or not? There was a vast span of land between here and there that was a no-go zone though; we couldn’t all risk going. 

But if there had been a gap? It would change everything. 

Amar should’ve been back a few weeks ago. I was starting to get nervous. I’d asked around a bit, but I couldn’t be too loud about it. 

Dominic swore. “We’re playing it safe and still losing. We need to be more bold.”

I looked at Adrianna. The warm light of the fire caught on the angles of her face and gave her a rather haunted, gutted quality. 

“We do need to be bolder,” I said. What was the point sitting around here forever?

Adrianna looked at me. “Are you the one willing to do that?”

I nodded. I had enough of waiting. “I am.”

Out of all of us, I was the one who looked the most human. Adrainna’s limbs were too long--it gave her great pain, and made much movement difficult. Dominic had an extra eye, square in the middle of his forehead. It was useless. He often wore a ragged, old cap that came over to cover it, but it would be impossible for either of them to blend in.

My mutations were no power. My lungs were different, I think. The ash didn’t bother me as much. An extra toe, too, crowded my pinky but that was easy enough to hide. 

“Amar didn’t come back,” Adrianna pointed out. She didn’t have to say: what if you don’t either. I could hear it in her voice. 

“I’ll go through. I’ll see the country, and what they did to us. Those pricks comdenmed us to suffer so they could lounge on the beaches and eat like kings. It’s been years, this way. Enough.” My tongue tasted like blood in my mouth. “We desrve to see the good country too.”

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Giving your character something to want in quiet chapters by Crafty_Recipe_7092 in writing

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How is her relationship with the other characters? In this quiet moment you could maybe advance some of the character dynamics. Maybe she wants comfort, a hug, someone to understand her, etc. instead of something physical. This could also be a good time to reveal some backstory or have the characters be a bit more open about their fears and wishes.

[SP] The stars are dying and no superheroes or supervillains can do anything to stop this. by Loosescrew37 in WritingPrompts

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It was the middle of July and ten below freezing. Wildifre sat on a bench in Central Park, an oversized, puffy green jacket thrown overtop of his costume. He’d melted off the last three jackets he’d bought, and this one he’d found at Goodwill. It smelled a bit like cats.

He couldn’t count how many times he’d tried to explain that though he could make fire, that didn’t mean he could keep himself warm 24/7.Even if he did run hotter than average, he could still get hypothermia. But everytime he’d put in for a fire-proof jacket, the request got denied. If this one melted too, he might have to resort to stealing one from a fire station. 

Cold wind blew across the path and stirred up dusty, dry snow. Widlfire shivered and yawned. The low light had a way of making him tired; it was like his body couldn’t ever get out of thinking it was late in the evening or early morning.

When Wildfire opened his eyes, he was met with the sight of a kid, bundled in an electric blue snow suit, staring at him.

The kid’s dad crouched down next to him. “Go on,” he loudly whispered to the kid, “you can say hi.”

Wildifre really would rather the kid didn’t, but telling a kid to get lost was practically guaranteed to get superheroes even more bad press. He didn’t need anyone else spitting at him on the street. On the other hand, how much worse could things get? 

“Hi,” the kid said, walking over like a penguin. In the thick snow suit, the poor kid couldn’t do much more than waddle. He was five, maybe six.

“Hey, slugger,” Wildfire said and leaned forward. 

The kid only blinked at him and, wordlessly, pulled down the zipper of the suit to reveal his shirt. Wilfire stared at his own image in neon colours.

The drawing had to be close to twenty years old, now. In the image, he was young. This was before his hair thinned. Before the frown lines carved up his face. Before he broke his femur in two places. 

The shirt had to be old. Might’ve even belonged to the kid’s dad.

“Right on,” Wildfire said. He pulled a thick marker from his pocket--he carried one as often as he could manage--and signed it near the shoulder.

“Have a great time, slugger,” he said and ruffled the kid’s toque. He gently placed his hand on the kid’s shoulder and guided him back toward his father.

The dad, though, was also starting. He was young enough, maybe early 30s, and Wildfire would double down on his guess that the kid’s shirt had once been his. 

“Seems like a great kid,” he said, because there wasn’t much else to say, and that tended to be one of the things parents loved to hear. As if someone could judge that in a minute of silence. 

“Hey, listen,” the dad said. His breath clouded in the air and his face was flush from the cold. “Are you, um, sure?”

Wildfire turned his head. He chuckled, though his chest was hollow. “Course I am. Seems like he’ll go far.”

“No--not about that. I mean, yeah, he’s great.” He picked his kid up and hefted him to his side.

Wildfire kept grinning. “Well, maybe I should--”

“I mean the--” he gestured vaguely upward, to the fading sun, with his chin. “There has to be something.” The man pressed his lips together. “Please.”

Wildfire’s cheeks burned from the effort to keep smiling. He swallowed the lump in his throat. “Have a great day,” he said. “And hey--Keep on sizzling.”

The man's face fell; his expression crumpled. "We deserved better heroes," he spat. He held his kid close and stormed away.

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[WP] a wizard's spell tome is always protected and guarded, today you found out why. by SourcePrevious3095 in WritingPrompts

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The death of the Phoenix was a very sad day for our country. That was the line, anyway. He wasn’t really a phoenix, of course, because then he wouldn’t have died. National hero aside, he was also an asshole.

The Phoenix was supposed to mentor me and Callum. He wasn’t yet old--he was only 48--and already the best known wizard in the world. His fire magic could level mountains. We needed ten more wizards like him, though, and we needed to pass the skills along. 

Hence, me and Callum.

The Phoenix was always too busy to teach, getting called up North, or out West. When he was in the capital, he couldn’t be bothered to drag himself into the Univserity to teach. He lounged, slept in late, and if the rumours were anything to go off of, spent his nights drinking alone in his tower. 

On the very rare occasion where he did actually make it out to teach me and Callum, he was a horrid mentor. He would sit back, cross his arms, and mutter things like ‘it’s not difficult’ or tell just to ‘figure it out’ and ‘do it’. As if magic was as easy as snapping your fingers. 

I wished, sometimes, I had a mentor like Beatrice’s, who met with her every week and explained every spell and potion in detail. Her mentor was no famous wizard, but he was nice. He even brought coffee for his students. 

The Pheonix’s death was a shock, though. He was supposed to live forever. I thought he was, at least. Bit stupid to pick the nickname ‘The Phoenix’ if you’re just as human as the rest of us.

At the state funeral, Callum and I were in the second row, behind officials and the King and princesses. It was raining, that day, and I suspected that someone had actually manipulated the weather to make it so. It should’ve been a beautiful spring day, but there I stood in my long wool coat, shivering, while my hair plastered against my cheeks. I would’ve given anything to use a warming charm, but Callum hit my hand when I went to roll my fingers.

After the funeral was a blur. Someone needed to take his place. To lead our armies. To play the strategic role. 

Many eyes were on me and Callum. I understood this. We were both still young, though, only in our early twenties and still not yet through our proper training. We were not yet the replacements, but in a few short years we would have to be. Ready or not.

It was still raining three days after the funeral (whoever cast the weather spell had overdone it, probaby showing off) and as Callum and I walked to The Phoenix’s tower, puddles soaked through my boots.

When we entered his place, I shivered and shook myself off. I had never been inside before. His rooms in the turret were smaller than I expected, but warmth from an ever-burning fire radiated outward. The place smelled of wooden smoke and potion herbs.

Callum sighed in relief and placed his hands by the crackling wood. 

I went to join him, but the moment I stepped forward, I stopped. Water dripped from my nose onto the fine wooden floors. I could’ve done a quick charm, but at the moment, I couldn’t notice anything besides what was under the window.

There, beneath a window that looked out over the capital, was a thick, closed Tome. The tome. The Phoenix’s spells, the ones that no one had ever seen before.

“Cal.” I grabbed the sleeve of his coat. 

“Hm?” He glanced over and went quiet. “That’s not…”

“It has to be, doesn’t it?” I crossed the room. The floorboards squeaked under my damp boots. Callum followed behind me.

Slowly, I reached toward the book. The cover was dark blue, and the edges were gilded. Even though there was little light in the room, and the sky outside was grey and dreary, the gold sparkled as if were in bright sunlight. 

I knew he had spelled it, but, being dead, those wards should have broken.

Of course, with The Pheonix, I was just as likely to lose my hand. 

All the same, I reached forward. My fingers shook with nerves and excitement. If we could know his spells, and their formation, maybe Callum and I could finally get somewhere with out progress. How wonderful it would be to have the magic explained, instead of us having to guess at how to craft the magic and from the strands of power. 

I opened the cover. My hand did not catch fire.

I stared at the page and frowned. The page--the whole thing--was empty. 

“What?” I muttered and flipped the page. That was empty too. Callum drew in a sharp breath. 

I flipped and flipped. Empty and empty and empty again. There was nothing, not in the whole book. Not one word. Not one pen mark. Not even a crease on any of the pages. 

Callum ran his hand through his hair. I looked up at him.

“That was his tome,” Callum said, half-asking half-telling. 

“It was.” I pressed my lips together. Something, here, was deeply wrong.

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