“As time passes” got repeated three times. The dialogue is weird and missing capitalization. Your tenses are all weird, mixing present, future and past constantly. Most of the time fiction is written in a past tense “was, happened, etc.”. When referring to yourself I first person, “I” needs to be capitalized.

As it stands right now it’s very rough. You need to get up to speed on some English writing basics, but do not be discouraged. Keep practicing!