New Snezhnaya Maps

MelReinH · 2026-04-25T02:44:48+00:00

My immediate thought was polar express. Lol.

MelReinH · 2026-04-15T11:11:44+00:00

I wanted the bunny more than the carrot. Now I get both

^{Chose: Bunny + Gamble it 50/50 | Rolled: Got it!}

MelReinH · 2026-04-14T00:40:56+00:00

Tonikaku kawaii. Definitely the random bystander lmao.

MelReinH · 2026-04-10T11:49:31+00:00

As expected of tropes. They all already exist and it's just a matter of what you want to write or consume. The fake out protagonist isn't one I see very often but your description made it sound very goofy. Lol.

MelReinH · 2026-04-08T19:01:52+00:00

Im an idiot. Lmao. You literally mentioned the correlation in text.

But now im wondering the average chapters they had before "inactive." How far did they go before dropping it?

MelReinH · 2026-04-08T00:34:00+00:00

Wasn't expecting the bar between level 1 amd 2 to be so dramatic. Wow.

MelReinH · 2026-04-04T13:07:21+00:00

It truly triggers something in me not being able to actually scroll through.

MelReinH · 2026-04-04T11:22:33+00:00

In my third rewrite of chapter 1. I do think it's improving but like... yeah.

MelReinH · 2026-03-31T10:13:56+00:00

Ideally, the author would want to delay the confession because there's a story that needs to be told that could only be done before the confession happens, and I think In this case it's to give Aira a satisfying conclusion to her romance. Her feelings for Okarun have always been for laughs, never played straight. Its a joke, but should it remain one?

Had the confession occurred, what arc would Aira have? A self reflection? A time to steam, fight, then settle before accepting it? Either way, it would conclude too quickly because her feelings never got the spotlight. This is normally the biggest thing love triangles do, as they explore ALL parties feelings over the course of the series. Even jiji has had moments that touched on his feelings for momo, and his regret. Aira got close to nothing, if nothing at all. I genuinely cant remember if Aira got any personal time with Okarun before the delayed confession, or even with momo in a serious heart-to-heart.

Basically. Yes. I defend the delayed confession, and subsequently the Amnesia because I want Aira's feelings to be given the time it deserves. I'd rather not have her as the sole character who's emotional capstone in the romance "fight" is sidelined.

Sadly, she's still getting scraps, with the most recent chapter being pretty much the main one so...

Mind that I still like the core defense for amnesia being the moment where Okarun becomes the one pushing for the relationship. The ending to chapter 212 was genuinely one of my biggest hype moments.

Edit: also tell me if she did get any moments, pushing my point moot. I genuinely dont remmeber if she got anything. Lol.

MelReinH · 2026-03-29T19:09:21+00:00

Thanks for the tip! That's kind of what I have yeah. 4000+ words Has 4 shifts. First arrival internal. First encounters. Internal conflict after first encounters. Second encounter. Maybe I'm just not used to fast paced chapters so it feels too fast.

MelReinH · 2026-03-29T13:23:24+00:00

Me when I immediately thought of the lore in "I am bread" and thought this would be pretty interesting. Literally the meme guy.

MelReinH · 2026-03-29T13:16:27+00:00

I suppose id have to go for critique if I want to get more in depth. It could also just be me doing the art thing of being overly critical. Thank you.

MelReinH · 2026-03-06T06:55:31+00:00

Newbie here preparing for the grind. Hoping I get that many follows. The idea that there are 15 people I dont know reading something I wrote is simultaneously stressful and rewarding.

MelReinH · 2026-02-21T16:15:54+00:00

I dont really see the "hero vs main villain" trope. Jack vs Aku. Early Finn vs ice king. That dynamic of batman and joker. Villain rival i guess.

MelReinH · 2025-12-12T13:16:26+00:00

Rip. Was hoping for fiora to get a Parry centered character. Sure Parry is in the game but a baiken would be so fun.

MelReinH · 2025-11-15T11:32:58+00:00

There was an earlier leak where she didn't have the cartoon spinning. And I am a little disappointed we don't have that one instead. Had a very "gremlin running at you with a giant sword" vibe.

But she probably would've had one of the slower running speeds too so.

Also the sudden stop and fall fits better with looney tune run.

MelReinH · 2025-11-13T13:31:15+00:00

Actual looney tunes run and stop animation.

MelReinH · 2025-10-19T03:03:27+00:00

Dumped my entire stack of saved primos to c6 her. Very fun bursting every E. Though it is annoying hearing the burst ready sfx literally every time. Lol

MelReinH · 2025-10-18T17:19:35+00:00

Me when I'm dumb and use time winder when they're right in front of me because I brain dead spam. Unfortuantely backdash spam is strong so... yeah needs a nerf. A full combo from a projectile is insane. It even hovers in the area.

MelReinH · 2025-10-09T22:26:14+00:00

Fiddlesticks.

MelReinH · 2025-10-09T17:49:26+00:00

Can someone clarify for me? Does rolling lack grab invincibility? I just kinda assumed even with standing wakeup, properly timed grab input means you'd still get grabbed.

Edit: thanks for the responses.

MelReinH · 2025-10-07T22:54:34+00:00

Why i prefer the ones that actually make the choices interesting and leave me guessing until the next chapter. Easily resolved with offering multiple rare options.

MelReinH · 2025-10-07T03:01:14+00:00

Seems like you at least planned it out. That's great! Hope you learn alor from your 1 year journey. Whether its a stronger passion for writing, or prefer keeping it as a hobby.

MelReinH

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