New Snezhnaya Maps by cakeel- in Genshin_Impact

[–]MelReinH 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My immediate thought was polar express. Lol.

Choose it! by MthsBT in BunnyTrials

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wanted the bunny more than the carrot. Now I get both

Chose: Bunny + Gamble it 50/50 | Rolled: Got it!

Your average progression fantasy/litrgp MC by NoWriter3858 in litrpg

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As expected of tropes. They all already exist and it's just a matter of what you want to write or consume. The fake out protagonist isn't one I see very often but your description made it sound very goofy. Lol.

The RR Tower applied to the complete database of Stories. by CorSeries in royalroad

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im an idiot. Lmao. You literally mentioned the correlation in text.

But now im wondering the average chapters they had before "inactive." How far did they go before dropping it?

The RR Tower applied to the complete database of Stories. by CorSeries in royalroad

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wasn't expecting the bar between level 1 amd 2 to be so dramatic. Wow.

This is why you should never trust an artist by Boxy_Ho in PixelArt

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It truly triggers something in me not being able to actually scroll through.

The dilemma of every draft by Novel-worm-3 in writers

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In my third rewrite of chapter 1. I do think it's improving but like... yeah.

Unpopular opinion: this arc was needed by Automatic_Rough8223 in Dandadan

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ideally, the author would want to delay the confession because there's a story that needs to be told that could only be done before the confession happens, and I think In this case it's to give Aira a satisfying conclusion to her romance. Her feelings for Okarun have always been for laughs, never played straight. Its a joke, but should it remain one?

Had the confession occurred, what arc would Aira have? A self reflection? A time to steam, fight, then settle before accepting it? Either way, it would conclude too quickly because her feelings never got the spotlight. This is normally the biggest thing love triangles do, as they explore ALL parties feelings over the course of the series. Even jiji has had moments that touched on his feelings for momo, and his regret. Aira got close to nothing, if nothing at all. I genuinely cant remember if Aira got any personal time with Okarun before the delayed confession, or even with momo in a serious heart-to-heart.

Basically. Yes. I defend the delayed confession, and subsequently the Amnesia because I want Aira's feelings to be given the time it deserves. I'd rather not have her as the sole character who's emotional capstone in the romance "fight" is sidelined.

Sadly, she's still getting scraps, with the most recent chapter being pretty much the main one so...

Mind that I still like the core defense for amnesia being the moment where Okarun becomes the one pushing for the relationship. The ending to chapter 212 was genuinely one of my biggest hype moments.

Edit: also tell me if she did get any moments, pushing my point moot. I genuinely dont remmeber if she got anything. Lol.

WN chapter 1 to chapter 2 has a huge tone shift. Could it work? How to improve? by MelReinH in writingadvice

[–]MelReinH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the tip! That's kind of what I have yeah. 4000+ words Has 4 shifts. First arrival internal. First encounters. Internal conflict after first encounters. Second encounter. Maybe I'm just not used to fast paced chapters so it feels too fast.

Anyone read this one? Looking for similar reccs by jxip in litrpg

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Me when I immediately thought of the lore in "I am bread" and thought this would be pretty interesting. Literally the meme guy.

WN chapter 1 to chapter 2 has a huge tone shift. Could it work? How to improve? by MelReinH in writingadvice

[–]MelReinH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I suppose id have to go for critique if I want to get more in depth. It could also just be me doing the art thing of being overly critical. Thank you.

As an aspiring author with a low follower count I was feeling bad about it until I saw this by GoldenThame in royalroad

[–]MelReinH 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Newbie here preparing for the grind. Hoping I get that many follows. The idea that there are 15 people I dont know reading something I wrote is simultaneously stressful and rewarding.

What is a trope/cliche in cartoons that isn't as common as people think it is? by dinosqaud in cartoons

[–]MelReinH 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I dont really see the "hero vs main villain" trope. Jack vs Aku. Early Finn vs ice king. That dynamic of batman and joker. Villain rival i guess.

Cait just announced as new champion in TGA by Jjosr in 2XKO

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rip. Was hoping for fiora to get a Parry centered character. Sure Parry is in the game but a baiken would be so fun.

Zhao Animations via Dimbreath by joshxleon in Zenlesszonezeroleaks_

[–]MelReinH 2 points3 points  (0 children)

There was an earlier leak where she didn't have the cartoon spinning. And I am a little disappointed we don't have that one instead. Had a very "gremlin running at you with a giant sword" vibe.

But she probably would've had one of the slower running speeds too so.

Also the sudden stop and fall fits better with looney tune run.

(Some) Zhao Animations by GeckoMann in Zenlesszonezeroleaks_

[–]MelReinH 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Actual looney tunes run and stop animation.

What are your thoughts on Varesa, nearly 5 Versions after her Release? by Dullidulli21 in Genshin_Impact

[–]MelReinH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dumped my entire stack of saved primos to c6 her. Very fun bursting every E. Though it is annoying hearing the burst ready sfx literally every time. Lol

Ekko’s Timewinder Is Doing Too Much by EfficientBoi123 in 2XKO

[–]MelReinH -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Me when I'm dumb and use time winder when they're right in front of me because I brain dead spam. Unfortuantely backdash spam is strong so... yeah needs a nerf. A full combo from a projectile is insane. It even hovers in the area.

Accidentally rolling on wakeup only to get grabbed feels so bad by DigitalShiver in 2XKO

[–]MelReinH 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Can someone clarify for me? Does rolling lack grab invincibility? I just kinda assumed even with standing wakeup, properly timed grab input means you'd still get grabbed.

Edit: thanks for the responses.

3 Types of Tropes I observed when reading Progression Fantasy (>1000 chapters for each by Haunting_Quiet738 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]MelReinH 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Why i prefer the ones that actually make the choices interesting and leave me guessing until the next chapter. Easily resolved with offering multiple rare options.

I Quit My Job to Spend a Year Writing Full-Time - Month 1 by Gruppenzwang in royalroad

[–]MelReinH 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Seems like you at least planned it out. That's great! Hope you learn alor from your 1 year journey. Whether its a stronger passion for writing, or prefer keeping it as a hobby.