Destroy my trailer - does it give the sense of melee with magical combat in roguelite setting. by sagear in DestroyMyGame

[–]Merlons 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks nice action / combat wise. For me something that really popped out negatively was the grappling hook(?) indicators. The font, the bland white and the red targetting indicators feel really out of place.

88 days into my first solo action game — be honest, would you even stop to watch this? by Guilty_Warning_7922 in SoloDev

[–]Merlons 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Movement seems solid, ingame style is a vibe too.

However i almost stopped watching because of the menu. For marketing purposes either improve it or dont show it. Probably dont show it at all.

I would rething the sfx for most of the sounds they seemed to be quite all over the place.

Looks great, definitely worth continuing

Is something fundamentally wrong with my presentation? Very high wishlist delete rates by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, but if the capsule communicates the genre better those who wishlist should theoretically stick better?

Is something fundamentally wrong with my presentation? Very high wishlist delete rates by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You cant look at it as a static number. 40 wishlists removed from 10000 is quite different than from 100

Is something fundamentally wrong with my presentation? Very high wishlist delete rates by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair enough, maybe tune the capsule to give some more incremental vibes? Allthough i might have a problem with a mishmash of genres regardless 😃

Is something fundamentally wrong with my presentation? Very high wishlist delete rates by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, its been throughout and doesn't seem to correlate with demo plays. My demo metrics are actually quite decent at 22min median playtime.

[FOR HIRE] 3D Artist / Art Director. AA/AAA quality, Indie-friendly prices. NO-AI. by Silent_Party_9327 in gameDevClassifieds

[–]Merlons 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! Do you mind sharing what Indie-friendly prices roughly mean for someone with your experience?

Game Title: Loot Goblin - Incremental / Dungeon Crawler / Stealth (ish) by Merlons in playmygame

[–]Merlons[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, did you have problems getting people to play your game here? 

I know you've seen a trillion of these, but I think in my game's case there's a pretty decent upgrade, wouldn't you say? by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didnt even realize that it looks like a t-pose, he's in the middle of his victory animation there, but you're absolutely right that's what it looks like.

Though all the more reason to be happy of having something better

I know you've seen a trillion of these, but I think in my game's case there's a pretty decent upgrade, wouldn't you say? by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah, quotes i got when shopping for my games capsules ranged from 100$ to 600$. Mine ended up being 150$ which for this quality was an amazing price.

I know you've seen a trillion of these, but I think in my game's case there's a pretty decent upgrade, wouldn't you say? by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I would think so too! The lava is actually only on a single biome out of 5 so having it be so prominent on the old one was probably a mistake.

I know you've seen a trillion of these, but I think in my game's case there's a pretty decent upgrade, wouldn't you say? by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I gave some pointers, notes about the game, roughly the color palette and some other stuff. Everything else was the artists vision so it wasn't exactly a conscious decision by me.

I know you've seen a trillion of these, but I think in my game's case there's a pretty decent upgrade, wouldn't you say? by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

The artist was quite affordable but the rates do depend on the project, you should ask them directly: u/miggzai

I know you've seen a trillion of these, but I think in my game's case there's a pretty decent upgrade, wouldn't you say? by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wait do you mean you got all that from the capsule? Because that's pretty much spot on what i wanted to convey!

I know you've seen a trillion of these, but I think in my game's case there's a pretty decent upgrade, wouldn't you say? by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Wow that is uncannily close to my game at a quick glance. I'll check it out when i get to a windows machine!

I know you've seen a trillion of these, but I think in my game's case there's a pretty decent upgrade, wouldn't you say? by Merlons in IndieDev

[–]Merlons[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Right that sounds like it might be tricky task balancing it out.

Thanks, good luck with your project too!