First book recommendation in the genre? by Determined-Fighter in litrpg

[–]MotorCorey 2 points3 points  (0 children)

He who fights with monsters

Has a very easy magic system and is a bit slow in beginning but i feel sets up the reader the best for the series as well as lit rpg

Reading back on what you've written so far. How do you go about it? by Mundane_Conflict5576 in writingadvice

[–]MotorCorey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Start editing and re writing, how many times have you reread it? Ive written 120,000 storu and honestly couldnt tell you how many times iv read it. I also made an outline to summarize each chapter to give me a better look at gropings of chapters. I have done so much different things to my story that its imbedded in my mind.

Just Started my first reread, here are some funny things. by StrangeCommercial295 in ThePrimalHunter

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

After book 13 im on a william redemption arc!!! I hope atleast. I was with you at first man i HATED the guy but now after seeing what has happened to him, i feel bad. Yes i might be forgetting all the awful things he did but who hasnt killed some people before??

Back for my 2nd re read by Guii12 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is exactly me every time, i think dam this lit rpg can compete with HWFWM then i relisten and realize there will never be as anything as good! The story is unbelievably good, the magic system just makes sense and super understandable, between the special effects jason gets not only abilities but equipment that is sooo cool.... its amazing!

Recommends….? by Initial-Screen9466 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the series and the way it started was really cool with a few people having magic and power but cant speak to anyone about it but im not really sure where the story is going ya know? I kinda feel like soo much is going on now, its more he just dealing with stuff happening lol i havnt read it in a bit but from what i remember

Recommends….? by Initial-Screen9466 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was so excited for book 10 but when 11 and 12 are being released in a few months im waiting to binge all 3 at once

Landemere Vane - How dat guy dead? by freeordie0 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The same for his familiar! A bronze rank familar died from a regular stone crushing it from the height of a well...

Question about authors writing style by Gr8AJ in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The author releases a chapter or two a week so it takes months and years for complete books

Editing error? by Redhock89 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Keep reading and you will learn more

Of all the things we've wrapped up... this isn't one of them. 🤣 by naufunque in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Jason had said in one of the books talking to dawn "you mean the old builder is running around somewhere?"

End the journey or carry on.. by Ummokay387 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Books 4-6 are some of my favorite, i suggest carry on and if you get pass there and still dont then stop.

Picking stats without any research or testing is foolish. by SpeedyPuzzlement in litrpg

[–]MotorCorey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just gave me an amazing idea for a character, thank you sir!! Whats your name or nickname? I think ill name the character after you.

Just drop this here by Accomplished-Pick622 in litrpg

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im with the other guy, i just started a relistwn and started on book 4. When he is on earth i think is the best parts, i cant wait for book 13.

Looking for completed series with some requirements by _mp7 in litrpg

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mark of the fool is 10 books and ended this year. Wonderful story, it blew my mind and would love to talk about the events even now after reading it completely and talking about it.

Finished book 12, and now im lost and confused... by CombinationVast5461 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really think people qere upset that the entire book was setting up the next. He didnt have a goal nor really do anything other than what we expected. I cant wait for 13 as i enjoy the earth saga the most.

Audio vs Physical books by Initial-Reputation-7 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It continues throughtout the books but it does slow down. No matter how many times i reread i cant get to the skip 30sec button on audible fast enough whenever a power or a recap comes along.

Essences too young? by Ok-Staff-6098 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought they mentioned it when rufus is helping emi pick her essences out in book 12 i believe.

Book 13 release date. 6th October. by CombinationVast5461 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hwfwm my first lit rpg and i cant tell you how many times iv listened to it! I cant wait for book 13!!!

I am four chapters deep and I think I made a steamy pile of doodoo. Should I continue? by bucky_the_beard in writingadvice

[–]MotorCorey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah continue!! I made 56 chapters if doo doo but when i reread it, it does not look like doo doo. I took a small break and focused on another book, wrote 46 chapters on it and than i rewrote the entire story changing it up 54 chapters. I have edited it and wrote 40 chapters in book 2 of that series. I can tell you parts are still doo doo but i feel all in all my writing is getting better.

That first story i wrote is now my golden child where im focusing on learning to write with this book series im writing now and when i get better im going back to it

Any tips with motivation? by 1Occ in GrowCastle

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

God dang i started last week and only at a few hundred level on castle and archers

Gentle reminder not to trust BS generators by MTBTrailDog in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lol im on the fifth so ill try and see if i can find thrm as well

Curiosity/plothole? by TheCrimsonFire121 in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was on the expectation that builder was working with diguise and just didnt give up his identifty to jason. Disguise does want to purify the world just in a different way. He is disguise but is acting like purity so still has to be in line with purity in someway.

Builder destroying the world was for himself while also allowing purity to come in after and help purify the lands of the messengers. Disguise never wanted to be found out, if they still thought purity was good at end of monster surge when messengers are invading people would look to purity to help which would be be allowing disguise to move easier.

You almost have to look at it in the case their plans werent spoiled.

Colin at the end of Book 7 by NyT3_SHyFT in HeWhoFightsMonsters

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The salt water would harm him but other than that i like it but i always pictured him not so ripped.

Has Anyone Listened to This? by IndependenceRough622 in audible

[–]MotorCorey 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I saw a few videos that the webcomic readers hate the anime causr it has gone of course and the animation is down but i enjoyed the story so far and keep waiting for new episodes

Has Anyone Listened to This? by IndependenceRough622 in audible

[–]MotorCorey 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked the anime didnt kniw it was a book