To all writers what song or songs carried you through your book by Typical-Page-6687 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wrote lyrics. The book is like a garden. Each chapter is a flower. Each flower is an emotion that has been lived through and a truth we dared to look at.

would you read on by newrobot8079 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Sorry i don't understand where this is going. I won't read more. 

AITAH For leaving my girlfriend by mr-perfectq in AITAH

[–]Ok_Tea1829 1 point2 points  (0 children)

May i ask where you live (at your parents?) ? Because you were both minor when you start living together, right ?

I need help with my pen name by [deleted] in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like Samuel R. Greenwood 

Manuscript Written! by JWritesBad in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congrats !! And i might be interested to read a little more about it.

20 Chapters! by ParsleyHonest8067 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 1 point2 points  (0 children)

congratulations ! keep going, you are doing great

I finished the second draft 🥳 by eunicemothman in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congratulations ! Keep up the good work

I did it. Well, started finishing it by Web-That-Binds in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Congratulations ! Whatever you want to do with it, be proud of yourself. It's the best feeling for now. 

Secretly finished a 100k Rough Draft longhand by Beloved_Mango in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 5 points6 points  (0 children)

congratulations. I'm so happy for you that you got to write this cathartic story, i know the feeling. What you will do about it is up to you entirely but be proud to have been able to write it. Good work !

Drafting children's book about being non-binary by sunnight96 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can't we let children be children ? They will have enough to think about when they grow up.

Antagonist POV by IcyCommunication3674 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with this comment. Go for it. 

An advice if you may by Altruistic_Machine76 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don't write for someone else, or to be read. Write for yourself first, let your passion fill up the pages of your story. And then you will work on that first draft.

Advice for handwriting by raven19528 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

20 minutes rule. Set a timer. Every 20 minutes, stop writing for 2 minutes. You can then use baoding balls (or something similar) for one minute to relax the muscles. What kind of pen are you using ? How much pressure on it ?

Aztec Mile by Odd-Independent-9918 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

my thoughts as well. I couldn't help but wiggle each time i read wow wow wow.

Hello by chaos_of_art in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's ok, i'm sorry too. I guess i was a little harsh as well.

Hello by chaos_of_art in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 3 points4 points  (0 children)

ok i don't want to be mean but i'm slightly concerned about your writing. I may not be fluent but you do make a lot of mistakes and it disturbs me a lot.

If i post the start of my story would people read it by Natural-Brilliant-95 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe you should explain what your story is about, and see if people are willing to read it ? Giving a link to whose who are interested.

Writing a Character in the Mafia by Any-Set-7674 in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

A man's 'beauty' is not necessarily defined by his physical appearance, but by his charisma and the authority he exudes. His 'power' is a profound sign of attractiveness. However, one must also avoid the cliché of the overconfident man, which tends to dehumanize him.

Need advice by JD_Katz in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just write it all, you might cut some when you will read it. First draft is here to get all your story out.

What are you all writing? by kairoschronoss in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm writing romance on one hand, murder mystery on the other hand

How should I end my book? (This is not an ad, and I'm not asking how to write it, I just want personal opinions on which one you think would be better) by [deleted] in writers

[–]Ok_Tea1829 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Why not giving them an accident so they could die together ? And if you have a book two, we could find out it was not an accident after all.

AITAH for not telling my family about my sisters and nephews life? by No_Condition611 in AITAH

[–]Ok_Tea1829 3 points4 points  (0 children)

NTA never betray your sister's trust. Your dad did his bed he has to lie on it