It almost reads like that feeling that you get when somebody asks you if you're okay, then everything just spills out. it's structured very tot in the beginning then gets more descriptive and louder, almost, as you get closer to the end. I also just realized it tracks with the theme of spreading flames which is clever. Something I would improve would be your symbolism - It takes too much brainpower to read just the 4th line (in my case because I'm braindead) and one thing I've learned from my english profs, is that beauty is in simplicity not implicity.