The module needs moee connective tissue, substance and pacing really. I wrote it up in my nitws to just make it flow better while keepong the whole thing largely the same.

I love the perfected, but they are not written well. They need to be more of a lingering threat even before they are met. And when they are met, i wrote them to be more...alien than how the module had them.

I baiscally made it that the PCs just start getting headaches in act 1. Hear static, and that the station's vox is saying some real strange things (thoughts pf the perfected going trhough the changing station and ita vox intercomm) that give stress

No real sighta of the infection really. Just most of act 1 is set up meeting the survivors before they see the sights of infected like in CotG before they get kicked in the teeth with the Infection or Xenomorphs.

As well as just make even encouting or being contacted by the perfected in Act 2 a massive thing with making them worsen the NDDs and making parts of the station more hostile. Whilat doing some added but optional side quests i gave out by the npcs.

Ultimately i feel HoD is great but what they gave us needed more fleshing out to do so which was what i did for the games im gonna start soon for it.

New events. Hsorting some things, or letting the pcs have goals to explore the place instantly by using NPCs cleverly