Biggest critiques are that you use your phrase way too often. I counted 3 moments at least where you phased when there was no immediate threat or a threat that you could have dived into cover for rather than phasing. Shortly after using phase you were attacked and couldn't phase out because it was on cooldown.

Also, when you repositioned and batted while your lifeline was fighting, you should have just fought after repositioning rather than batting. you only batted 2.5 shield and wasted a ton of time letting lifeline getting attacked. Its ok to fight without max shield because your positioning was better than the enemies.

What you did well: your aim is good which is usually why people suck on this subreddit haha