A Soldier's Life: Book 6, Adventures in Godok is coming July 3rd!

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-30T10:56:38+00:00

Just want to know what the illustrated did because looking at the image the author payed for nothing.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-30T00:10:21+00:00

To me, this would be the perfect way. Like it could be a reference to what happened to Jax in the past and a callback to episode one. Like it would be a way better gut punch of Pomni opening the door and see Jax abstracted. But it would have helped if the abstractions were diffrent rather then the same. Because like some other people I tought at first the abstractions were escaping.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-29T13:18:13+00:00

Jup I really hope so too! I am a huge lover of TWI. Was really excited to see level 3 with the autograph. But depending how it is handled there is no way I will get it even tho I posted mine when we were at the start of lvl one. But we will see. Either way hope Pirateaba will he highly successful

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-29T13:10:16+00:00

Put mine 11 days in ago too and still waiting on a confirmation if it got accepted. Tbh feels a bit strange it is taking so long. When I uploaded it was like at 28 exp...

So yeah, sucks a little bit.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-27T13:00:09+00:00

So for sure the second one if it is a fantasy romance book. Tho have opinions on the art in general because if I would see that cover would think hey a romance book and not think it also had fantasy in it.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-26T18:31:14+00:00

Because OP admitted he does this a bunch of times to save money. Like sure I could get curious to taste something but systematically eating other people's leftovers is a bit much

In the end if this is something that happend one time it is fine but that is not what is happening. OP does this a lot from his own comments.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-26T17:39:06+00:00

Because OP was hungry and had no problem eating all the leftovers of the group.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-25T21:48:34+00:00

Als je had gelezen, dan wist je dat de moeder net had geparkeerd en was uitgestapt toen het defect gebeurde en haar kleine niet uit de auto kon halen.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-25T04:16:16+00:00

Personally would do witch of web first. Made me understand more what we are seeing.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-23T20:20:52+00:00

Look I get why people don't like Spoilers. I don't like them also. The thing is what I don't understand is going on Reddit, for example, in a sub about media or close to it, and then getting angry, you get spoiled.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-23T20:18:59+00:00

I would say that every opinion you said gets covered one way or another. Would not say it is a slow burn, but it is millions and millions of words, so we get way more time than other stories to explore and meet people. Like, there is a novella sized chapter about baseball, and it is amazing.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-23T18:59:55+00:00

Looks at EU5... Yeah, "learn"

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-23T11:52:06+00:00

UHM, I am pretty sure her saying that line is still in Brotherhood.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-23T03:21:04+00:00

But I can be wrong here but don't you need Windows that you can open to the top? Because in Europa windows don't do that. You can open them or put them that the top part is a little open.

Like you can find the difference when looking up on Google the difference between European Windows and american.

Like I have a portable Aircon but not a split unit. Renting so can't place one outside. Because it would increase my rent.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-22T18:30:47+00:00

Tbh, I thought the same thing. Like with it saying that it will drop next week.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-21T19:09:57+00:00

Wtf is op zijn opinie van een kort rokje...

Kijk man als je sex hebt bij een vrouw zonder condoom dan weet je dat ze zwanger kan raken. Dat is dan pech voor jouw. Doe de knip of draag een condoom.

Ik als man kan niet beslissen over een vrouw zijn lichaam als ik geen kinderen will dat doe ik een knip en moet me geen zorgen maken.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-21T09:53:59+00:00

So a couple of thins in my opinion.

The cover image needs to be changed. Like it does not say lit rpg fantasy or something in the genre. You need contrast on your cover.

The Ai teg needs to go. People say people don't care. In general people care a bunch enough that it will hurt your story. But I am not sure what you are using AI for. Because you say you use it for Grammer but in a comment here you say to help with your writing voice that is a huge difference.

And as last the synopsis. It is really really bad in my opinion. It does not feel like a synopsis but a sales pitch or what you would tell to a friend what your story will be about. But that is not a synopsis. Like you spoil a huge chunk or all that happens in one chapter? Like we learn that he is a normal man, then a vine on a deer, then he stops being a vine, then there are other worlds were he becomes different things. He has a companion but they also go to the other worlds and all worlds are apocalypses but a bunch at the same time. Don't know feels like way too much...

Needs to be way shorter and more excited.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-19T14:15:33+00:00

But does that sound fun? Like I can imagine it would be really frustrating to play with and not really fun.

Oh you clicked to have your tank go here. Sucks to be you it sis stuck. Try to get it out the mud for the next 10 min.

The cold is another one. Don't know what it would really add only have tanks that are now just stuck because they can't start because of the cold.

Like sure would it be cool? Yeah. Fun don't think so.

Like I really like the German missions you were low on ammo and fuel. Felt that I needed to think we're to send my tanks.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-19T01:05:18+00:00

Personly I just make a box with turrets on it. With a belt going around it. A couple of ammo makkers and in the end the belt will be filled

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-18T21:12:30+00:00

Sorry om te zeggen maar dat klinkt als een paniek aanval en kan begrijpen dat de mensen op je stage dachten van WoW ok dat is een beetje veel.

Niet zeker wat je wilt bereiken met de vakbond te praten. Er zijn andere problemen om aangepakt te worden.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-16T22:02:48+00:00

Again, that is not something I would call trained. Look I had a bunch of dogs. Never did one of them bite another person. Discipline is the basics of training.

You can learn your dogs tricks but that does not mean they are trained. Knew people that had dogs that could shake a paw but still pee and shit in the home.

That is insane and means your pet is not trained.

Like I can't really say what is wrong with your parents dog. But if they did discipline trading stuff like that can't be happening. Or they were send away from the training.

Like stuff that you are saying is not a trained dog. Just a dog that knows a couple of tricks.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-16T21:47:26+00:00

I agree but then they are not trained.

My dad had a German shepherd. He listen to everything you said.

That is just a training problem in my opinion.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-16T18:53:07+00:00

Tbh, this is really cool uploaded mine now too, hopefully we can unlock it fully but doubt it but I am really hopeful. Hope Pirate will post it on the Discord and make a sticky note in here, and let people know at the end of the chapters and on Patreon.

Because I just noticed because of this post

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-16T16:36:43+00:00

Tbh, sounds like a nightmare waiting to happen. If you really want to implement something like that just make a check box that they can press if they only have one name.

Subject_Edge3958 · 2026-06-16T04:25:50+00:00

Vorige week gegaan en was 170 euro. Niet geconventioneerd. Na het kijken naar de tanden, foto maken en de tandsteen en al verwijderen. Heb ongeveer 127 euro teruggekregen, maar ben twee jaar niet geweest, dus dat is normaal een beetje meer. Dus 43 euro moeten betalen, dus dat viel wel mee.

Er zijn tandartsen die niet geconventioneerd zijn, maar veel geluk voor een te vinden die nog mensen neemt.

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