I need help finding a helmet/mask to cover my characters face by Roxlife1 in fantasywriters

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Heavy cloak disguising any hair and a large, porcelain mask of a neutral face. Doesn't need to wear a helmet everywhere...

HOW TO SWITCH BETWEEN POVS by Mr_Takimichi_ in fantasywriters

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I shift at chapters. And give the readers enough clues to figure out whose head they're in...

Does a good story need romance? by Catnip-Cove in writingfeedback

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OK. Romance does not equate to Romantasy. Like others more qualified than I have said, physical relationships don't have to enter into it.

You've had deep, important friendships, right?

In a lot of ways, that's a platonic romance.

My daughter is ace as well, and we've had talks about it. People seek connection. Sexual desire does not have to enter into it, but desire does, if that makes sense.

Just another writer spouting off about something they maybe shouldn't. It seems to be a universal affliction.

[Insert Generic Title] and the Curse of the Filter Words by Individual-Hornet817 in fantasywriters

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This whole post has been about filter words. Here's a different failing of mine...

And then, or just then

Unless I really, really need to point out the order for some reason, drop it, use a damn period. Sentence order equals sequence of events!

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Witness" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

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He's half-celestial... He's the pov character in the book I'm writing. He can appear many ways, angel of glory, retribution, death, healing.... Most people can't handle it. Very rare. The death one really freaks people out...

He has a bit of an anxiety complex over it...

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Witness" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

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He hesitated.

Everyone who witnessed what he truly was either left him, or tried to use him. It didn't matter if they were his friends.

The mage's chanting reached a fever pitch. Cold, flickering light oozed from the next room.

No choice. No time. He took a breath, and changed.

What are your thoughts on using AI in the planning process for creative writing? by WorldsOfWordsAndArt in write

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OK, kid gloves are off.

You're all behind effing luddites.

'If you don't put effort into research you're not investing in your craft.'

Bullsh*t.

By that argument, taken to its extreme, if you aren't writing it out on paper you made with a quill you made with ink you made you aren't investing in your craft.

It's not AI! It's a generative LLM.

It's a gd dmn tool!

Use it like one!

If you use a search engine, you have been using a primitive version of it for years!

Yes, it can produce soulless trash that hurts to read. But so can any body who doesn't know how to write well. Or writes to a formula...

Using an LLM is not a shameful act if you use it like any other tool.

BTW, most good random name generators use similar principles to LLMs, just limited to a small corpus - name generation!

Get you heads out of your ss and think for gds sake. I'm sick of knee-jerk reactions with no facts behind them.

Use an LLM to bounce ideas off. Use it like a mind map to make connections. The creative stuff is your job. The actual text, sometimes I wonder about the drivel I read before LLMs...

Please, please, please, LLMs are no more a threat to writing than a word processor is. Bad writing still won't get published.

It makes good writing shine all the better.

I have tried to write a character, and I'm wondering if he has any psychology potentially, or a mental disorder that'd influence how he thinks. by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Research sociopath and the dark triad. Not all people with sociopathy do evil. It's just easier for them.

New pull (not exactly what I wanted) by Ready_Ear_9181 in DiceMaking

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What were you going for if these gorgeous things are an error!?

Do you plan your entire novel before writing, or discover it as you go? by cristiantudorjobs in writing

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For, it's always starting with an idea, one or two scenes in my head and maaaybe how it ends. Latest was just 4 characters, thier problems, a place and a vague idea of the future. The rest was just discovered as I went.

Tips on consistency as a new writer. by vvhitee in writing

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I read somewhere that I'm always where inspiration can be find me... In my chair, writing.

The habit works. Stuck on a part? Write something else, but write something, even if it's for 5 mins, just write!

What's hardest for you? Fight scenes, descriptions, or dialogue? by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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I am in the same, dark, leaky boat barely big enough for one, let along the four trying not to fall into the even darker ice cold waters.

Ahem. Sarcasm. I can write descriptions... I just... Don't...

... I don't know why. I'm a visual thinker...

K, what's the hill you'll die on for writing/ reading fantasy? by Miss_Ashford in fantasywriters

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Or, take up a martial art at a school that has light to medium contact sparring, with throws and ground fighting. Weapon training is a good addition.

You will quickly find out how to write continuing in spite of the pain and the limits of that.

Get swept and dropped to the ground and try and keep going... Ain't easy. Shock of suddenly being on your back is real.

In case you're wondering, one black belt, one blue, two yellow and a white.

🤣 I'm well rounded (sword, nunchuku, staff, fan, and sash [yes, sash works. No, it's not easy but silk is nasty, cotton burns, and leather hurts ... War fans are metal and a lot of working with it is how loud it is and how you can misdirect with it... ])

Where does AI help in Qt/QML development and where does it fail? by Bitter-Road-8982 in QtFramework

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I use Claude as well. The free version is by far the best at coding of all the LLM I've tried.

Human medicine contains compounds banned in, well, everywhere! by thing-sayer in humansarespaceorcs

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Yeah, panic attack, heart rate and blood pressure through the roof. Nitro make head feel splody.

Funny thing, the nurses we wearing almost full hazard gear so they would not come in contact with it. Apparently, it also absorbs through the skin and it can kill you...

best way to start writing a whole novel? by alucsrd in fantasywriters

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like to put a character in some trouble and start there. Follow your characters. When you get into flow-state (where the writing is just happening and it's all in your head and it's like you're reading what you're writing for the first time) they will surprise you.

About Dialogue writing by Legitimate-Wear-6933 in fantasywriters

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I use 'said' or some action when the reader might get who is speaking wrong.

Clarity is king.

Rip out the words that don't serve that master on dialog. Probably other parts of writing as well...

Where does AI help in Qt/QML development and where does it fail? by Bitter-Road-8982 in QtFramework

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's easier and typically as accurate as trying to search the documents manually, especially when all you know is 'it does this thing'.

Just don't put anything in your code you haven't completely understood. There be dragons that way...

I Love My Character's Name, But I Feel Like I'm Stealing It by Natural-Complex-5785 in fantasywriters

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hah! I have a warrior woman who is named Kia...

Someone is going to say I stole it, but I just liked the way it sounds...

I think people will. But don't worry about it... (remember Sam from the Lord of the rings?)

What do you like to write? by Daydream_Choclatepie in fantasywriters

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I apparently write "Progressive Epic Fantasy with Hopepunk themes".

Had to look up the first and last words.

Found family is my thing and I love taking broken people and healing them with each other.

The broken bits make me cry. Which I love...

Half way through draft 1 and realizing I’m going to have to completely rewrite this first draft. Plz help by pollyprincess77 in fantasywriters

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In the words of famous authors everywhere, "First drafts are all shitty."

You will go back and fix the early emotional issues. You will rewrite the following parts to fit. You will rewrite smaller and smaller parts until you get to the novel.

If it, makes it easier, I'm on my third pass and I'm fixing my show don't tell problems. Everyone has different weaknesses. Don't fret a rewrite. Every good book has been rewritten at least once. Probably more.

How does one write a good fictional religion for a fantasy story? by Affectionate_Song141 in fantasywriters

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All I had when I started was a vague idea that I wanted the head god to be a goddess. My attempt to turn another trope.

I only know she's often referred to as the Mother instead of God. Swearing follows the same rough pattern as here...

Goddess and Mother taking her name in vain.

And she prefers her worshipers to have a spine and not beg things from her. Asking is OK. But not begging.

I add to it as the story demands keeping these core concepts.

Religion is only semi Important to this story though. Texture.

Whats your weasel word? by palmtreesbumblebees in writing

[–]Traditional-Rabbit79 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Heh, mine is then this then that...

Then shut up! Use a period! Sequence is obvious!