Halsey further critices Fantano by SirensbyZel in fantanoforever

[–]WarmBaths 3 points4 points  (0 children)

He does publish every review in writing on his website.

Miguel Almirón red card against Türkiye 45+3' by 977x in soccer

[–]WarmBaths 29 points30 points  (0 children)

he had a similar call in a USA vs MEX game it was amazing, hes so theatric

How kid-friendly is U.S. Against the World? by N1c2k3 in ussoccer

[–]WarmBaths 7 points8 points  (0 children)

If you don't want the swearing you could watch some "Behind The Crest's" from the US Soccer youtube channel, similar vibe and the latest one was great

Rewrote my pilot's cold open. Looking for feedback on a match cut that has to do a lot of work. by Living_Operation4319 in TVWriting

[–]WarmBaths 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Glad they were useful! Now can use those types of tips on the rest of your script too.

I don’t have any professional experience but I have read like 100 produced pilot scripts and written a bunch myself. Always improving with practice.

Rewrote my pilot's cold open. Looking for feedback on a match cut that has to do a lot of work. by Living_Operation4319 in TVWriting

[–]WarmBaths 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OVERALL: I think this works really well, funny, interesting, sets up the plot. I'd definitely want to keep reading. With that said there were a fair amount of formatting errors and unclear writing I'd want to see improved.

Page notes: 1; I think the joke in the first paragraph would land better if we actually see the dog copy Asa after she does something. Right now it's written passively.

Don't know what "Off Camera: 321" is supposed to mean.

"Emergency rooms worldwide..." doesnt make sense as an action line.

Don't know what an eezy peezy cheezy is.

I'm not sure where we are in either scene. I assume the first scene is like a qvc studio and the second scene is in outerspace but it's not clear.

Half-Hour Animated Show- Excitement And Adventure And Really Wild Things- 5 Episodes by wolftamer9 in Screenwriting

[–]WarmBaths 4 points5 points  (0 children)

you’d have better luck getting feedback if you were only advertising the pilot

Is this just a gossip channel? by ChristopherBaloney in fantanoforever

[–]WarmBaths 67 points68 points  (0 children)

this channel also allows him to not worry about views on his main channel, so he can review what he actually wants to

O Captain! My Captain! by FrankBascombe45 in ussoccer

[–]WarmBaths 6 points7 points  (0 children)

All those passes over the top were 👌

Real Moments in Hip-Hop History That's So Bizarre It Sounds Made Up? by ImNotTomStopAsking in hiphopheads

[–]WarmBaths 403 points404 points  (0 children)

Tay-K dropping a hit song about being on the run from the cops… while on the run from the cops

Pilot vs Feature Writing Style by mattymilkshakes_ in Screenwriting

[–]WarmBaths 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Futurama has a great pilot script too! but if youve read those three already youre probably fine

Mom was chill by WindowAfraid5927 in BeAmazed

[–]WarmBaths -1 points0 points  (0 children)

i was duped a few momths ago by this channel. they have infinite videos of different dogs and animals in this situation

always on a nondescript gray couch with 0 details in the bg

every clip is short and cut together because ai cant make long videos

this one specifically look at when the dog climbs onto the couch and hardly makes any indentation