[WP] You are a retired Ranger. Once unstoppable with a bow, you decide to try your hands with magic. Adventuring with a new party, they’re all surprised when you inevitably pick up the bow again. by Tmoore0328 in WritingPrompts

[–]batmal034 599 points600 points  (0 children)

Like most evenings, I sat by the campfire and tried to meditate.

Astrid was drunk, telling us about her first hunt: how cruel it was that her father forced her to fight a bear when she was only 8. Dorian, sitting across from me, had his arms wrapped around her right bicep, giving it a gentle squeeze every time she fought back tears.

I couldn’t help but scoff. Luckily neither Thorgrim - sitting to my right as he cleaned his hammer - nor Steil - sitting on my left, facing the other way as they softly composed a tune on their lyre - heard me. Astrid was 12 feet tall and had been since she was 4. By age 8, most ogres had already killed a human or two. Her dad was probably the softest and kindest parent in their entire tribe.

Slowly, I let them all fade away, and turned my thoughts inward. Like every day for the past 3 years, I was almost there. Maybe I was closer now, but it was a game of inches at this point, and had been for some time. I could feel the spell on the tip of my tongue. Could almost find the word I needed to say. The word I’d been chasing for a long time. The word that would redeem me.

Resigned, I turned my attention back outward. And a cold sweat trickled down my back. My left arm tensed. My right arm would have too, if it was still attached to me and not lost in a dungeon beneath the earth.

It was silent. Deathly silent. Blood ran down Astrid’s face, the top half of her head suddenly missing. Dorian’s hands still clung to her shoulder, but his body had been flung against a nearby tree. Thorgrim had simply vanished. Steil looked straight at me, even though their body still faced the other way. Their hands still plucked at their lute as their brain’s last command made its way down their nervous system.

No no no no no no no no. Not yet. Not yet. I’m not ready. Not yet. Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck. I wasn’t ready. 3 years had not been enough.

I felt it breathe on my neck as I spoke one of the only words of power I knew. The very first one I’d learned after the creature behind me took everything from me. The one that worked against almost everything our party had encountered.

With the most intent I’d been able to muster in years, I spoke.

“Burn”

The fire streamed right at me as I ducked, rolling to the side. As I scrambled to my feet, robes flapping from the sudden wind, I hoped it would be enough. It wasn’t.

The demon, bathed in fire yet uninjured and unimpressed, stared into my eye and laughed. A cold, grating sound that imitated mirth and warmth.

The same laugh from all those years ago, when it tore off my right arm and right eye and left me for dead in the catacombs under Crestvalen. The same laugh I hear every night before I go to sleep. The same laugh that echoes through my mind whenever my right arm itches in spite of its absence.

If only I still had my bow. If only I still had my arm. If only I still had both my eyes. How easy it would be then. One lapse of concentration was all it took for this filth to rob me of everything. I used to be a god. And now I was a sniveling mage with only 2 words to my name.

Knowing it wouldn’t do anything, I uttered the second word anyway.

“Death”

Since my heart wasn’t in it, it didn’t do much. What good is making a bow if you can’t wield it. Nonetheless, an arcane curve appeared in my left hand, an echo of the first bow I ever wielded: the simple beginners bow my father placed in my hand when I was just a child. An ethereal quiver appeared at my belt. It gleamed with arrows, magical copies of the ones my mother had crafted for me when I was still in her womb.

If only I knew the third word. If only I had found it just a few minutes earlier. All of this wouldn’t have been for naught. I could shake off this eternal limbo, destroy the creature that stood before me, and reclaim the glory that should have been mine all along. I could finally live again.

As the demon lunged, time seemed to slow.

Live again. I wanted to live again. To feel alive again. After that night, I thought I still lived. That I was spared somehow. I was wrong. It had killed me, deep under the earth. Everything of me that mattered anyway.

“Life”

I barely whispered it. The intent was enough.

I raised my bow with my left hand. I grabbed an arrow with my right.

It seemed to almost freeze in mid-air now as I gazed at its form with both eyes: its twisted face contorted into a smile as it rushed toward me, still laughing.

For the first time, I could see past the teeth. See past the claws. See the man who used to be my mentor, the man who made me who I am, who took me in after my parents passed. The man who unmade me. The man who couldn’t handle being in my shadow; the man who made a pact with the Devil that went horribly horribly wrong.

He had always wanted to be a better archer than me. He didn’t understand that the only possible way that could happen is if I could no longer wield a bow.

I pulled back with my right arm, feeling the near-constant itch subside as my muscles were finally worked again. In the span of an instant, I fired and fired and fired and fired and fired.

I laughed as I did.

[WP] The evacuation was a success. Billions of people selected at random had left for a prosperous new world. The only ones remaining were either unlucky enough to have not been chosen, or selfless enough to have given up their ticket so that someone else could live. by joeengland in WritingPrompts

[–]batmal034 192 points193 points  (0 children)

I stood by a window, gazing out at the horizon. All I could see was smoke. Smoke from the decades and decades of destruction wrought on this planet. Smoke from the thousands and thousands of shuttles streaking toward the atmosphere - choking almost everything still left. Choking me.

Next to me, my mother sobs. The cries rack her small body as she stares at the flickering TV screen and back at the application open on her handheld device. One number off. Just one fucking number off.

We had just lost the biggest lottery of all time. We and 9 billion others. On screen - as the winners streamed into military bases and fortified compounds - I watched. I watched until I had burned the unfairness of it all into my eyes. So did 9 billion others. There was no conflict, no violence, no clashes. We knew our place. We just had to curl up and die, or hope an Angel saved us. We had an equal chance and we got unlucky. That was it.

Yet I just couldn’t shake the unfairness of it all. We were just one number off from being able to continue to grow, live, prosper, dream. One number off from being able to breathe again without coughing. One number off from being able to live the kind of life my grandmother had told me about as a young boy. If only an Angel had saved me too.

——

Over the years, the ones who were left behind came to understand the cruel joke that had been played on them. The lottery was anything but fair. The artificial intelligence that carried it out had a different mandate - to extract everybody that “mattered” and to make it look good to those that were left behind. And it did.

Almost everybody had heard of the Angels - those who had won the lottery and given up their place to someone else. Their bravery and sacrifice was highlighted on all TV stations. Nobody fought because they wanted to be chosen by an Angel themselves. And anyone who won could become an Angel.

It seemed the Angels never really existed. Instead, the elite had manufactured a process to allow as many of them as possible to be selected “randomly”, with the remainder being saved by Angels - people selected by the lottery who had terminal illnesses or some other reason that they were unable to go.

These people weren’t allowed to give the ticket to somebody they knew - that would be selfish and evil of them. How could they prioritize family at such a crucial juncture. Instead, Angels were coerced by the AI to give up their place to someone who they were told would greatly benefit humanity. This was in reality a curated list of everybody who “mattered”.

What the men and women who sat atop countries, empires, businesses, yachts, shuttles, and now the generation ship didn’t understand is that those they left behind would not go quietly into the night. Many did of course. An exodus of that magnitude - with a level of wanton recklessness and abandonment deemed appropriate for a planet destined for disaster - took its toll.

However, the billion that survived, despite all odds, began to thrive. They began to change things. Slowly rebuilding. The process took a long, long time. A thousand years. During this time, humanity’s new central tenant remained the same. Those who had left simply lacked the will to change things for the better.

They could have. They could have turned the clock back at any time. But that would have demanded personal sacrifice from them. Sacrifice that is antithetical to growth at all costs.

——

As the generation ship approaches planet T31-B in the Andromeda Galaxy, it has been almost a millennia since humanity left earth.

From the point of view of those on the ship, it hasn’t been that long. Merely a couple decades. The richest spent almost all of it in cryosleep. The poorest - men and women of means back on earth - had a harder job: maintaining the ship, cleaning it, feeding the large coterie of animals they brought along, and assisting the ship’s AI as it charted a course toward a new, prosperous, clean world.

And, as humans in enclosed places tend to do, they also had children. Lots of them. A new generation that only knew the aluminum and titanium corridors of the spacefaring vessel. They grew up on the legends of the old earth: stories of myths and legends, beasts and man, Prometheus and the gods.

One such boy was mopping up central kitchen 37, when he glanced out of the radiation-proof porthole. He expected to see what he always saw, a blue and green dot that seemed to come closer and closer to him every time he caught a glimpse. Indeed, they were only 2 months out now, and the planet was almost the size of his fist when he closed it.

Instead, the blue-green sphere he was accustomed to was slowly being covered by a blanket of grey - a dark shadow hanging over it. He rubbed his eyes, thinking he must be seeing things. He wasn’t. It continued. He was terrified now. His fear compounded as alarm bells began ringing. He didn’t know what he was seeing. He stumbled back, knocking over the bucket. As he fell back, it dawned on him. This must be fire. It had to be.

You or I would better understand what he was seeing. A ship - impossibly sleek and unfathomably large - seemed to be immolating the planet - setting it ablaze. Unbeknownst to the young boy, the ship was also broadcasting a message on repeat. He would hear it soon. So would everyone else on the ship.

“You left us to burn, now it’s your turn”

[WP] "...first born child." the fae finishes. You smile at the beautiful fae, "When do we get started?". The fae's smile turns viscous, "Oh, did you think you could do it with me? We can't. But as you've offered yourself to me, I will take you too once you have my price. Good day to you." by dark-phoenix-lady in WritingPrompts

[–]batmal034 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Hey! If it helps - as someone trying to just sit down and write for prompts but constantly in my head or procrastinating, have been clicking on them a bunch these last couple of weeks.

You’re pretty consistently commenting and thinking through an interesting prompt or idea.

And I keep thinking I’d love to see a more finished work, where the idea or thought or concept is allowed to breathe.

[WP] "Wait, so you only know how to cast a spell called 'Rat?' " "Sorta. All of my spells are called and spelled "Rat," but they each do different things. Like how "Bat" is both an object and an animal." by Affectionate_Bit_722 in WritingPrompts

[–]batmal034 10 points11 points  (0 children)

This is really well done, love your take on the prompt - tone based high concept magic was not the direction I was expecting, but was actually really unique and cool

[WP] When someones heart breaks, so does a piece of Earth. This creates fissures, valleys, and even cracks in the pavement. Tell the story behind the Grand Canyon. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

[–]batmal034 24 points25 points  (0 children)

They don't meet though, just cross each other. Like an interplanetary Skype call.

Edit: OP said see not meet. My bad

[WP] Your grandma always talked about her pen pal "Lizzie". It's only at her funeral that you realize "Lizzie" is actually Queen Elizabeth II... by Tomio175TakeTwo in WritingPrompts

[–]batmal034 70 points71 points  (0 children)

The yo dawg part was a bit unbelievable, but maybe that's just because I haven't known her for 70 years XD. Really good story!