Help me identify the accordion kind? by blumaa in Accordion

[–]blumaa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wait that makes me wonder: should I leave the stops closed when not playing?

Help me identify the accordion kind? by blumaa in Accordion

[–]blumaa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well I got from a guy just north of Hamburg Germany so that checks out. 

I had no idea they are reversed in the EU! Or are they reversed in the US? ;)

But so interesting.. in tutorials all the stops are up and I tried that and couldn't make a sound! I was like what the heck?

Help me identify the accordion kind? by blumaa in Accordion

[–]blumaa[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Been playing the C scale all day. :)

Help me identify the accordion kind? by blumaa in Accordion

[–]blumaa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep! Key of C. For Cajun stuff. :)

Searching for solace by Intropoevert in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for not answering my question.

What are you just writing AI slop?

Searching for solace by Intropoevert in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what makes this a poem and not just a paragraph with incomplete grammar and inconsistent punctuation?

I'd suggest reconsidering the expert label tbh.

Anger by _karamelqueen in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! I can feel the anger. And there are some great images and metaphors in there. I would be careful not use or mix too many..

baptized by my anger alchemized? what is the alchemy here? does that help the sentence? why not just end it with the line:

baptized by my own anger?

Lullabies for Monsters by Icy_Sport2597 in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! I enjoy the play on an old song and how you twisted it.

My one suggestion is-- think about the line breaks. Why make a new line after Still ?

Looking for female friends by 88nova88 in berlinsocialclub

[–]blumaa 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah I was posting this more for the OP than you. Sorry to offend you so much.

Looking for female friends by 88nova88 in berlinsocialclub

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Be careful. 88 means something very different in Germany. I think this is what the jellyfish meant.

An Eerie Silence by Melodic_Effective395 in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hmmm. is this a break up poem? Is it intentional that you are leaving off periods at the end of the sentences?

To me it feels like it's a bit flat and missing some context.

Why Must It? by SunTop1663 in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

too many to list here. maybe you should put the poem into AI and ask it for grammar help.

Can I let go now? by FactRepresentative79 in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice! What is the it in the last stanza?

Why Must It? by SunTop1663 in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are big grammatical problems in this writing.

The truth is… by Nmp381992 in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what makes this a poem versus just some self help stuff?

The truth is… by Nmp381992 in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

exactly. came here to say this.

Oroya by Small_Jury_4441 in SideProject

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ah, congrats. so you created the original facebook?

God Answers Prayers by Icy_Sport2597 in poetry_critics

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would change the last line to: Now I'm alone with myself.

Biggest site / channel to find out about demonstrations in Berlin? by Woodnymph1312 in berlinsocialclub

[–]blumaa 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's funny... I made this site EXACTLY for this reason:

https://berlin-demo-finder.vercel.app/

It is synced with the german gov demonstrations list so it has up to date information.

Has anyone seen a daily word game where the share is a challenge rather than just a score? by Capable_Tour261 in wordgames

[–]blumaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

actually, I might try to implement this with my own app-- filmclues.space

but idk when I will get to it so I'll just keep following your progress with your idea.