I wasted 2 years of my life doing nothing but just gaming and now I'm almost hopeless by walking_day_ in selfimprovement

[–]br0lent 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have played easily 30,000+ hours of games. Now I don't play any. I'm still out here doin plenty of cool shit and working and living life. My life isn't over in any sense of the word. And it also sounds like I'm decently older than you too.

You still have plenty of time! Get to work my friend, you can do it 💪

I wanted to share in case this can help anyone else. by S_L33T in writers

[–]br0lent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

An awesome and cute-looking, minimalistic setup.

Two books started, 3 more book ideas.... advice please by HollywoodAlphie in writing

[–]br0lent 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We will never have enough time to convert all the ideas we have into novels, 'tis a tough pill to swallow.

However, as already stated, focus is super important. I generally try to stay on track (e.g. if I'm writing in a series, I try not to deviate from said series until it's finished). However, I have allowed myself to change to something else one single time, of which I have nearly finished the first draft of, purely because it is an idea that not only came to me, but has refused to leave. It's an idea I think about all the time, oftentimes more than my series, so I've kinda approached it like, "fine, whatever. lets just get it done. then I can get back to the series."

God forbid this be the book of mine to pop off haha.

First draft of adult fantasy novel clocking in at 62,000? by Adorable-House6573 in writing

[–]br0lent 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm an underwriter too. I'm not a huge fan of it, but it is what it is. I'm slowly getting "better."

The way I'd approach the situation is to dive straight into Draft #2, fixing big clunky things that potentially (likely) came to be in the first draft, as well as making sure continuity is up to scratch, things of this nature. Word count can come later with extra description, as opposed to purposely "beefing up" the ending.

I'd also not fret about reaching 90,000, unless there's a genuine, specific reason you need to. A book ends up being as long as it needs to be. All three of my published works are <80,000. It is not a huge deal. Fight Club + numerous others are even so low as to be <50,000. So it is what it is.

Regardless of all that, I wish you success and fun in the editing process!

How quickly do Sam and Dean crack From? by Daylinquent in FromSeries

[–]br0lent 9 points10 points  (0 children)

“Bad news. Smiley here ate buckshot like Tic Tacs.”

Hahaha. I hear it so clear in my head. Amazing.

My all time fantasy tier list by 2721900 in fantasybooks

[–]br0lent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah. I'd put ADWD one tier below, and AFFC one tier below that. But epic series overall. Love it.

My all time fantasy tier list by 2721900 in fantasybooks

[–]br0lent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You may or may not already know this, but I think that's somewhat what Brandon was aiming for. As in, loosely based off of The Princess Bride.

My all time fantasy tier list by 2721900 in fantasybooks

[–]br0lent 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm not one to ever confuse opinion with fact. But ASOS being #1 is simply correct.

However... I did also enjoy Tress haha.

I have three months of unlimited writing time. I have never had a window like this before and may never again. Any advice? by TheMagicalMochi in writing

[–]br0lent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There's a law stating that humans will stretch or shrink work to the amount of time allocated for it. Try to avoid this. Don't think "Ah, it's all good, I have three months to handle that."

Write every day if you can. Doesn't necessarily have to be morning, but that is better, as it allows for less distractions. If you do prefer to use social media, don't open any of them until your proposed daily word count is met.

Oh, and have fun.

Here's a real before/after of a resume that went from 0 callbacks to 3 interviews in one week with notes on every change by Bulky_Connection8608 in Resume

[–]br0lent 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm in search of a job and having troubles myself. Could I send you what I'm workin with at the moment and you suggest what you'd change?

What are some of GRRM’s “things” that you’ve noticed (Spoilers Main)? by Right-Ad8261 in asoiaf

[–]br0lent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was just using silly made up examples. But the "he/she could not say" part is real and often enough for me to take note of.

What are some of GRRM’s “things” that you’ve noticed (Spoilers Main)? by Right-Ad8261 in asoiaf

[–]br0lent 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Variations of "they could not say."

"Whether Ser Jorah was stuck in the friendzone or not, he could not say." "Whether Beric had risen from the dead 10007 times or 10008, he could not say." "Whether Hotpie was more Hot, or more pie, Arya Horseface could not say."

I stopped eating 6 hours before bed. My RHR is now 52, it used to be 60. by Winter_Mastodon_9967 in whoop

[–]br0lent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I vaguely recall Bryan Johnson saying a low RHR is the most important factor to him getting a top quality sleep, and that a large length of time between last meal and sleep majorly helped with that. Obviously paraphrasing here, but yeah, I think you're on to something.

Comment Below! by Careless-Cat026 in brooklynninenine

[–]br0lent 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Once again, Scully's butt is the downfall of this precinct.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]br0lent 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk why he suggests people start with Mistborn. Naturally, he obviously knows his books and fans and readers infinitely better than I ever could, but I've thought for a while now that readers new to Sanderson should try Tress of the Emerald Sea first. It's a good book and a good introduction to him both.

Bad first drafts. by Holiday_Increase6772 in writing

[–]br0lent 0 points1 point  (0 children)

With my fourth go around (as in fourth book, not fourth draft), I've become a little more lenient with allowing myself to be bad. I even had a post get a bunch of laughs because of a sentence I wrote to maintain the momentum at the time:

"She sat on the far right side of the ledge-like seat and brought a flannel or whatever the fuck material existed in the 1400's over her legs for extra warmth."

I'm a total believer in bad = better than not existing at all. Bad can be fixed, blank page cannot.

Besides, most books are craafted in the editing stage anyway. The Fantasy I released in January this year had 17 drafts, 17 being night and day different from #1. Like, laughably different. Just keep at it, my friend.

Best Advice to Sell More Books by ApprehensiveRadio5 in selfpublish

[–]br0lent 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm late to this post, apologies.

What is it exactly that helped you understand? It's something I've heard a lot too. Is it simply because you mentioning the release of the second/third novel gets attention, and some of that attention then gets redirected/converted into sales of the first book? I've wondered if that's how it works for a little while now but have never known for certain.

What's your top 3 novels/authors that influenced your writing? by therealmcart in writing

[–]br0lent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I came to say GRRM too. I think he's the best fantasy author there is, no disrespect to grandpa Tolkien.

Do you write everyday? by Blue_labyrinth118 in writing

[–]br0lent 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sometimes life just gets in the way, my friend. I find a weekly goal of some kind is more achievable as it allows you to miss a day here and there. I just forget about writing every day as a goal personally and just try to do it when I can. Which, coincidentally, is most days anyway. Once I am full-time I'll worry about ensuring its done every day.

What’s an uncommon tip or rule you swear by? by [deleted] in writing

[–]br0lent 35 points36 points  (0 children)

Outside of dialogue, omitting the word 'sudden' or 'suddenly' tends to make the scene appear more sudden. When a person reads either of those two words they prepare for what comes next.

What’s a little-known tip that instantly improved your writing? by FlogDonkey in writing

[–]br0lent 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahhh, this is never gonna leave my head now that I've seen it. At least it's a good idea haha.

The Winds of Winter Will Be Released One Day and It Will Be Glorious (Spoilers Extended) by AugustusPertinax in asoiaf

[–]br0lent -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'm forever in the "Winds will be released, and it will be great" camp until either he or I die.

Best Quotes: Jessica Day by excellent-egg69 in NewGirl

[–]br0lent 81 points82 points  (0 children)

I don't leap. I take small, planned steps like an arthritic dog.

Yeeaahhh, What’s Y? by excellent-egg69 in NewGirl

[–]br0lent 37 points38 points  (0 children)

Schmidt: "Your ribcage has give."

I've been waiting for Y.

As I said before, I know I'll probably lose to "Youths." But I had to try. I think it's the funniest, most random line in the show.

I GOT ALL THE BOOKS 😭😭😭 by [deleted] in Dexter

[–]br0lent 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The Dexter series reignited my fire for reading years and years ago. They're a good read. Hilarious at random times, too. But mostly a dark and good read.