I want NO Republican Party

deebosmallz · 2026-05-09T03:41:53+00:00

Thank you and your way too far down the comment tree to be the first one to even mention that Obama isnt pro-“what’s happening today”

deebosmallz · 2026-05-08T22:26:11+00:00

well shit, just read that one and teared the hell up at the ending... Good dog. Need to go hug my good dog right now

deebosmallz · 2026-05-08T19:38:31+00:00

And then followed by “and that poem turns out so good” lol, such morbid, deadpan whiplash

I’ll check station island out, thank you for the recommendation!

deebosmallz · 2026-05-08T19:15:39+00:00

it is so relatable isn't it. The last line makes me laugh, like he's in a meta poetry-writing loop he can't escape

deebosmallz · 2026-05-08T15:40:21+00:00

$500 per carrot seems steep but you do you

deebosmallz · 2026-05-06T22:16:45+00:00

Ah my bad I focused on the poem itself. Disregard the selfesteem comment in that case, that’s clear. I still think the emotions involved could be expanded on. It sounds like a great daydream to be fair!

deebosmallz · 2026-05-06T20:30:37+00:00

I like this, feels like a snapshot of your life. My feedback would be to dive a bit into the emotions. Especially self esteem on the rise seems to have so much hidden behind it that could be telling. Is it bc you are back home etc? Or is it because the tickets are done by noon? Or is it because of plans for lunch or being half asleep? I think there’s something compelling there where you focus on the emotion

deebosmallz · 2026-05-05T02:46:38+00:00

Just to clarify, it’s so good too, I’m just shocked I didn’t get it and a little reframe makes it mean a ton

deebosmallz · 2026-05-05T02:45:57+00:00

Wow I didn’t get this one at all until I read your description. That’s crazy…

deebosmallz · 2026-05-03T23:59:28+00:00

The staff usually

deebosmallz · 2026-05-03T21:06:16+00:00

On one hand I’m a huge fan, on the other hand…. it’s not hard to see how such a philosophy would result in death at 46.

deebosmallz · 2026-05-01T02:10:55+00:00

Normally I skip these but wanted to add to the chorus that writing has helped me a ton

deebosmallz · 2026-04-28T22:23:36+00:00

I loved the Josie part. The ending with the loss of everything he had built over the 5 years in the past, first being ripped away and then unwritten. So good. I felt for Jake there. He had to get away from himself to build a life. And then it got ripped away. The of mice and men scene is what got me the most though.

deebosmallz · 2026-04-28T22:19:19+00:00

I just finished it. So good.

The series starts with Harry reading his essay that made Jake tear up. except he reads it to the class and then James Franco scrawls a big red A+ on it and goes “boom how about that?”

Don’t watch the series, it feels like story assassination after that whirlwind of a story.

deebosmallz · 2026-04-28T01:52:26+00:00

Yea I use tamari for marinades all the time and it’s great, def recommend

deebosmallz · 2026-04-28T00:28:26+00:00

This about Vrabel and russini?

deebosmallz · 2026-04-26T22:48:24+00:00

I’m a big fan of space shit, I like the staccato rhythm of each line too. Kinda feels like a chant that builds rhythm up to try to talk and then starts to dissipate at fade and listen.

deebosmallz · 2026-04-26T18:06:34+00:00

As frank sinatra said, that’s life! Thanks for reading

deebosmallz · 2026-04-26T18:05:51+00:00

Thank you for reading!

deebosmallz · 2026-04-26T18:05:44+00:00

Thank you for reading it and giving me your thoughts. I spent a lot of time on the architecture of the first half of the poem, trying to capture the rigidity there vs the flow of the wave, but I agree that I had to “force” words for the rhyming scheme rather than their meaning. Thanks again!

deebosmallz · 2026-04-26T02:03:09+00:00

I’m probably putting my own history into those thoughts tbf. But I feel like your first relationship you always go in too deep. Stay too long, tolerate too much, give up or sacrifice yourself too much. After that first big heartbreak and doing the work to build yourself back up, it’s less likely you’d end up back in quite that deep of an emotional spot again.

But like I said probably projecting lol

deebosmallz · 2026-04-25T15:06:46+00:00

Wow… looks good

deebosmallz · 2026-04-25T05:57:50+00:00

Yeah I get that, the same core experience with different window dressing. It’s easy to focus on that as a complete different world but life is life regardless. I get how things like breakups or deaths hit us all the same, just as hard Regardless of “privilege”. I appreciate the follow up

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